Face Your Demons by ilovebender.com

[ilovebender.com]

something deeper than that
lost thrown
in an ocean
unknown
there's something deeper
than what you know
so deep
the water comes
and swimming
is the only way shown
so it's the only way go'ne
when you swim you don't want to
swim home you go on up the river
alone, ride by any tide you
fight build your stride through the current
that so many seem to know but you don't
you're twenty three
and don't have education to rely on
said fuck your C-D
"aheh-hah"
I mean M-P-three because
nobody's
going to
buy them
download them, - Whatever!
So why try when trying's not
trying and you're at home
like a bum yea
you know people but
the contacts
are old
like your mum
so what's the pont of trying
when trying alone
won't get you
you're own home, see...

See what!?
I get you
but I get
to
play
Sweet Child O' Mine and I'm
set to
have a good time
as I
go from
one song
four to nine
play how ever
many I like at the
drop of a hat
and that's not a pun
for Slash but a saying
not fact
to describe
this ability
I have with
single notes
chords and halfs
pre bends
full bends
tone tone
semi tone
tone
semi tone
tone and
all that jazz.
Love guitar
love life
love girl(s) and
one love, peace
fuck love loving tonight, that's what I
Da Red Eye Jedi
Hyper Hippie did write
wishing he met
a little ms. right, I'm Mr. Wrong, please tell me what you think of my seventy
six bar song, Peace!

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[Mr. Chambers]

link of feedback?

[ilovebender.com]

link or feed back, huh?

I choose feed back.

[Solace]

link or feed back, huh?

I choose feed back.

Are you retarded lol

[ilovebender.com]

just talk about what I wrote...

[Solace]

The new rule is that you need to put a link of feedback in your original post so that you show you're helping others too and not just leeching off of the site and posting your work.

[Mr. Chambers]

closed until link is added or pm'd to me.

[ilovebender.com]

something deeper than that
lost thrown
in an ocean
unknown
there's something deeper
than what you know
so deep
the water comes
and swimming
is the only way shown
so it's the only way go'ne
when you swim you don't want to
swim home you go on up the river
alone, ride by any tide you
fight build your stride through the current
that so many seem to know but you don't
you're twenty three
and don't have education to rely on
said fuck your C-D
"aheh-hah"
I mean M-P-three because
nobody's
going to
buy them
download them, - Whatever!
So why try when trying's not
trying and you're at home
like a bum yea
you know people but
the contacts
are old
like your mum
so what's the pont of trying
when trying alone
won't get you
you're own home, see...

See what!?
I get you
but I get
to
play
Sweet Child O' Mine and I'm
set to
have a good time
as I
go from
one song
four to nine
play how ever
many I like at the
drop of a hat
and that's not a pun
for Slash but a saying
not fact
to describe
this ability
I have with
single notes
chords and halfs
pre bends
full bends
tone tone
semi tone
tone
semi tone
tone and
all that jazz.
Love guitar
love life
love girl(s) and
one love, peace
fuck love loving tonight, that's what I
Da Red Eye Jedi
Hyper Hippie did write
wishing he met
a little ms. right, I'm Mr. Wrong, please tell me what you think of my seventy
six bar song, Peace!

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=99851&p=1370145#p1370145

wow.