Full Of Hate

[mdemaz]

Good shit bro.
I seriously want to hear you spit on the mic.
Don't resist the microphone dude.

[VenomBlackViper]

Good shit bro.
I seriously want to hear you spit on the mic.
Don't resist the microphone dude.

Thanks man, it's not that i'm resisting it I just don't have the equipment to record yet & when I record I wanna do it right not on some shitty built in laptop mic. Which is why i'm putting off recording until next year.

[mdemaz]

Good shit bro.
I seriously want to hear you spit on the mic.
Don't resist the microphone dude.

Thanks man, it's not that i'm resisting it I just don't have the equipment to record yet & when I record I wanna do it right not on some shitty built in laptop mic. Which is why i'm putting off recording until next year.

Laptops are the best thing...Just get Sun Virtual Box and emulate Vista so you can do stereo mix and mic at once then do your freestyles and demos in one day.
That's how I rolled in 2006.

[VenomBlackViper]

No I mean I don't want to use the laptop mic that came with this computer, that's all I got right now. Not to mention I need my own place to record, which is why i'm doing all this next year when I move out. Also I add all of these together into songs, I only have one verse I plan on using as a freestyle only everything else is already part of a song or i'm going to add it to one eventually.

[mdemaz]

Oh..Ok then...

[jackychan]

this is dope and has some really sick lines.
keep posting man. i love it.

[ThomasAguanis]

This was easily the best of the verses I've read tonight. The improvement from verse to verse is clear. Your flow and structure are pretty on point. Rhyme Asylum and early Eminem are clearly influencing your writing, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. You're very clever with words and still seem to e forming a style that suits you. This one works well, but make sure you make it your own. You're on the right path to, so it's really not an issue. Great job on this verse.

[VenomBlackViper]

This was easily the best of the verses I've read tonight. The improvement from verse to verse is clear. Your flow and structure are pretty on point. Rhyme Asylum and early Eminem are clearly influencing your writing, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. You're very clever with words and still seem to e forming a style that suits you. This one works well, but make sure you make it your own. You're on the right path to, so it's really not an issue. Great job on this verse.

Thanks man appreciate your feed on all 4 verses

[Kez]

I don't come in here much, but yeah those are some good punches haha. This is my kind of shit.

[EyeQ200]

Death artist, I draw blood with a pen knife
Now that's death (w)rites

You say you a gangsta but you're a fake & a liar
I burn my bridges over a lake of fire

Drugged up villian
And I hate your guts but i'd love to spill em

1st, sounded a bit short on the second line compared to the first, same goes for the second, needed like 2 extra syllables in there to even it out.
Drugged up villain seemed a bit short and boring, i hate to start this on such a negative, but it's easier to point out the things that i thought were wrong/need tweaking
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