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Forgive And Forget

Postby Mr Change » Jul 9th, '11, 04:48

To everyone out there
Who hates for some reason or another
When I don’t hate you
This song is to you

Now look, while I’m in this position to start reminiscin’
I’ve cooked a little petition to get myself forgiven
I overtook my dissin’ ego so I ask for a listen
Your shook, chill out, let me relieve some tension
I’ve never tried to offend anyone that this song is out to
And if I’ve offended you on purpose, that means I musta’ knew
So if your on the offence ‘cause of somethin’ I said to you
You may wanna take a listen first, check out my point of view
‘Cause, maybe what I said wasn’t aimed at who you think
Maybe you just want me dead ‘cause your missin’ a link, or two
Baby ain’t being fed ‘cause this beef is on you
Your face is getting’ red, like it’s your rap debut!
I know your hustlin’, but man just kick back
Instead of tussling, why don’t you just relax to this track?
No fightin’, no cussin’, I’m just bustin’ out facts
‘Cause you know this problem between us, it only distracts
So cut the act


Basically tryin to write a song about people in my life who have a problem with me when I never gave them a reason to and just wantin to say put it behind us

criticize :unsure:
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"Soon as I stopped saying I gave a fuck
Haters started to appreciate my art
And it just breaks my heart to look at all the pain I caused
But what am I gonna do when the rage is gone?
And the lights go out in that trailer park?"
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Re: Forgive And Forget

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Jul 10th, '11, 12:07

I think it's a LOT better from your previous stuff! I kinda thought the flow was a BIT choppy (or maybe it's the fact that it's 6AM here and I haven't had sleep yet (lack of sleep tends to do that)) but content wise, I really liked it! It's something I'd write about. Keep it up! :y:
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Re: Forgive And Forget

Postby Mr Change » Jul 10th, '11, 21:39

thanks much appreciated :D
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jinofthewind wrote:And Koolo's sources said... Nothing you idiots Koolo's sources are dead they're locked in my basement

"Soon as I stopped saying I gave a fuck
Haters started to appreciate my art
And it just breaks my heart to look at all the pain I caused
But what am I gonna do when the rage is gone?
And the lights go out in that trailer park?"
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Re: Forgive And Forget

Postby JawsBoof » Jul 11th, '11, 03:33

What the fuck is that shit! It reminds me of a retarded Eminem! On his first song!
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Re: Forgive And Forget

Postby Mr Change » Jul 11th, '11, 09:06

JawsBoof wrote:What the fuck is that shit! It reminds me of a retarded Eminem! On his first song!


A retarded Eminem on his first song? You mean, like a normal dude who decided he wanted to write a rap?

In that case it sounds about right, so, thanks? I guess...

screw off. :facepalm2
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"Soon as I stopped saying I gave a fuck
Haters started to appreciate my art
And it just breaks my heart to look at all the pain I caused
But what am I gonna do when the rage is gone?
And the lights go out in that trailer park?"
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