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Re: Think Twice

Postby classthe_king » Aug 5th, '11, 21:15

Geno wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Half Japenese in 1988- "Put on your dress of orange and we’ll go buy a door hinge"

What have we learned from this?

Eminem bit Half Japanese.

orange and door hinge is a common rhyme.

Eminem rhymed orange juice / four inch screws / door hinge loose

You used those in a shorter rhyme scheme. :coffee:

You've admitted to liking SSLP, so I don't know why you can't say you may have subconsciously used the same rhymes. I've done it before too. Ah well, why argue lol.


EXACTLY. It's a COMMON rhyme. I also used corpse in and morgue then. Who did I bite those from? Actually, I bet I can find every single rhyme I've ever used somewhere else, so I guess I've never written anything original in my life and neither has anyone else on this forum.
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