Quick Writes

[Man1x]

Old Age

Aght, fold the page
Breaking out this stone cage
Lone sage with these words
Cause I can utter a phrase
Get some praise, and choke you out
Doesn't take days, you die like Billy Mays

The flood

Call me the bed bug
Crawl into bed, said "Hug"
Now I taking all the little children out in my van
Crush dey skulls into the sand, put them on my feet....VANS

He Can't

My actions never reflected a saint, but why did he faint?
All I did was tear the skin of his dick with dry paint

Edit: It works if you pronounce can't as cane't

Looking retarded

I shook n' carted the boy like milk
I hit like a volleyball and spiked him still

start shit

Told the bitch we done, a heart hit
We parted our relationship, parted shit

These are all from the mutli phypher, I just want feedback.

Also feedback on http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=121765
Would be appreciated.

[J.R.]

They are all pretty dope, like em all really.


Good use better flow and more multis though.

[Man1x]

They are all pretty dope, like em all really.


Good use better flow and more multis though.

Thanks man, I'll keep it in mind. Oh, and that chronic rhyme you did, man. That made me want to bump my game up on my next verse

[J.R.]

They are all pretty dope, like em all really.


Good use better flow and more multis though.

Thanks man, I'll keep it in mind. Oh, and that chronic rhyme you did, man. That made me want to bump my game up on my next verse

lol thanks, it was just a flip on your chronic bionic rhyme with a twist.

Anywho, Feed the song in my sig? Don't have to, just asking.

[Sam.]

hey man ! i gave you some crazy replies to this in the form of conversations .

[Man1x]

Haha, what? ^

[Sam.]

Haha, what? ^

I meant my verses that followed yours .

[Man1x]

Oh, gotcha. Thanks for the compliments