Out Of My Mind

[Eedee]

All I have to say is daaamn. I actually LOVE writing in Relapse-Style. I personally find the possibilities in it endless, because you go from literally Shady, to Jeffrey Dahlmer to... Bizarre.

I loved your "In Other Words" punchline, you HAD to have seen the hate over Em's and did yours.

Really though man, I liked it! Especially how you had 5 verses! Keep it up!

The hate over Em's and did my own?

Did I miss one of his punchlines and accidentally make one of my own that was near one of his??

He means you said "other words", an expression eminem has himself used to death and is now mocked for by some of his more dick-headed fans.

Ah, right. Haha. So stupid of me... *cough*

And I don't mind his "in other words" punchlines. In my opinion, they're the best.

[JamaicanPattlez]

All I have to say is daaamn. I actually LOVE writing in Relapse-Style. I personally find the possibilities in it endless, because you go from literally Shady, to Jeffrey Dahlmer to... Bizarre.

I loved your "In Other Words" punchline, you HAD to have seen the hate over Em's and did yours.

Really though man, I liked it! Especially how you had 5 verses! Keep it up!

The hate over Em's and did my own?

Did I miss one of his punchlines and accidentally make one of my own that was near one of his??

He means you said "other words", an expression eminem has himself used to death and is now mocked for by some of his more dick-headed fans.

I wouldn't say dickheaded 'cause Em's used it at horrible times in not so great ways, but yes. Execution I'm assuming is the real problem people have with it, but yeah. I like how it was done here though.

[ArsheyHaq]

Ahaha damn, that was very enjoyable to read. That was REALLY all over the place, but you made it work more times than not. I didn't find many multies in it, but no matter. I almost forgot the fact, because the flow was just too much fun and the rhymes slipped off the tongue easy. Keep 'em coming, man Hilarious stuff.