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[ArsheyHaq]

Your piece was so good that people forgot you didn't have a link of feedback for it. I know you're new, but read the rules. One link of feedback is required in order for you to post, but this section and it's management are kinda shit lately.

[Ka0t1c]

it's simple yet effective rhymes made this piece an interesting read

[Maybe]

I really like the message in this piece. I normally don't judge a song based on content alone, but that's what sold me on this. Either way, it was well written and very comprehensible. Good rhyming, good structure, etc.

9/10.

Good stuff man, hope to see more from you.