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I'm Not Crazy

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Re: I'm Not Crazy

Postby Sam. » Sep 11th, '11, 12:24

:coffee:

This is not that bad tbh,although it needs little touch up here and there ,but other wise it's fine .I notice some typing mistakes in the initial bars .
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Re: I'm Not Crazy

Postby Man1x » Sep 11th, '11, 15:44

Agree with Sam, liked the flow in some parts but if you touch it up it could work better cause at points I lost the flow. I also like your imagery :y:
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Re: I'm Not Crazy

Postby SG. » Sep 11th, '11, 16:51

I like songs like these. Very great, I can see why you attempted it during writer's block, because it's very rhyme driven. That said though, some rhymes didn't work.
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Re: I'm Not Crazy

Postby Atone » Sep 13th, '11, 03:11

I'll be aiming sum'n big into 50's house, yell "it's a murda, bitch!"
Video-tape myself next to his momma's rotten balls just shoving bricks


that made me laugh so hard but i loved this, exept for those 2 lines this sounded like a Slim Shady style flow
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