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Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

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Re: Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

Postby Sam. » Sep 17th, '11, 15:39

B.Nutz wrote:
Sam. wrote:Don't share to the limit about that past that it doesn't stay personal any more .

^ That's the advice that I would give to you . (and myself too) :y:

Sorry about how slow I was returning your feed, but I got on too it. That has to be some of the best work I've read around here. Damn. :y:

No shit breh ,I read your comments at the Lounge and I knew you feed me and also some where you said about returning feed later this week .

So it's all good. :smoking:
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Re: Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

Postby J.R. » Sep 17th, '11, 15:42

Yup man,

Btw, what's your next track?

Let's make a deal, you feed me and everytime i'll return it when you post, like if you could feed this:


viewtopic.php?f=24&t=126263&p=1758926#p1758926

I'll feed your next, too . :y:
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Re: Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

Postby Sam. » Sep 17th, '11, 15:52

B.Nutz wrote:Yup man,

Btw, what's your next track?

Let's make a deal, you feed me and everytime i'll return it when you post, like if you could feed this:


viewtopic.php?f=24&t=126263&p=1758926#p1758926

I'll feed your next, too . :y:

The next track that I am doing is a solo and is posted in C.W Lounge named "She Calls Me Insane"
viewtopic.php?f=71&t=121921
Don't know when i am gonna finish it ,I am working on the 3rd verse .

I am on that track from the moment you put it .
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Re: Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

Postby J.R. » Sep 17th, '11, 15:54

Sam. wrote:
B.Nutz wrote:Yup man,

Btw, what's your next track?

Let's make a deal, you feed me and everytime i'll return it when you post, like if you could feed this:


viewtopic.php?f=24&t=126263&p=1758926#p1758926

I'll feed your next, too . :y:

The next track that I am doing is a solo and is posted in C.W Lounge named "She Calls Me Insane"
viewtopic.php?f=71&t=121921
Don't know when i am gonna finish it ,I am working on the 3rd verse .

I am on that track from the moment you put it .

its up, and the moment yours goes down ill be on your track. :coffee:
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Re: Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

Postby Man1x » Sep 18th, '11, 18:57

B.Nutz, good verse but there is a lot of excess that could get cut off. The curse words, when not used to rhyme are kind of like fat. You may need a liposuction but other than that I loved it bro. :y: I felt it.

Cream, I think this was the best verse I've seen from you in all aspects. I really liked the message:

"Maybe your brain is missing, and your main focus is lyricism"

Really loved that line, this site is really rapped in lyricism and forgets that that is one fourth of the sword. The others would be concept, emotion/delivery, and if you get the message across.

Good job guys, I think you two would make a great group like Ego if you both sat down and really melted your verses together, I understand that's hard by only typing though.

Oh and if you could hit me up on: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=126370
It'd be appreciated.
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