Lights (Random throwaway verse..Tryna build momentum)

[RainMan44]

Just trying to build momentum before writing for my album

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Hopin' out the limousine, the women scream
The cameras flashin' so the rocks on my fingers gleam
The hatin' ass nig-gas scheme
They must've thought that life is as easy as it is in they dreams
Nonetheless we ignore them and hit the scene, spend a G
Only thing concernin' me is weed, liquor, cream
Never been the type to tend to a bitches needs
If you faggots can't tell by now, I'm sick indeed
Haters ain't threats, we got triggers, aimin' at 'em
I'm quite sorry you couldn't milk me for your payments, madam
And I must admit, it's a damn shame you haven't
Managed, to make me buy you the latest bag yet
'Cause I ain't liable to buy a hoe a Diet Coke
Bitch tries messin' with my dough, I go into fighter mode
Light a load...of green, sit back and fellate me, trick
You shady bitch, you money hungry hoes make me sick









First 6 bars influenced by Jay

[RainMan44]

[Just Silver]

this piece was nice multis almost all the way through was very enjoyable I liked the line with the diet coke lol..

the only thing that I did not really like was the length but that was not really a big deal I have short pieces all of the time just wondering was this free versed

[RainMan44]

this piece was nice multis almost all the way through was very enjoyable I liked the line with the diet coke lol..

the only thing that I did not really like was the length but that was not really a big deal I have short pieces all of the time just wondering was this free versed

thanks for the feed bro

and yes, just writing a random verse. No bigger picture to it.