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Mat Demaz- Sea Of Lyrics (Freestyle)

Postby mdemaz » Oct 9th, '11, 18:05



I'm homicidal a maniac that likes sniffing farts
you'll get blown away from my skills this shit is art
I'm taking a corpse to the dump and hid him in a toilet
I'm flushing clowns out of grass so people annoying me less
this ain't pokemon after battle I gain experience points
while you run away must be a pain to fear me and my joints
I lined up 2 rappers shot them both with a crossbow
yeah your heart is cold blah blah but I bring the hot flow
I'm drowning people mentally with a sea of lyrics
no life preserver can save you time to be my bitch
doing drugs in a dinghy talk about a speed boat
this is freestyle without swimming idiot let's see you cope
all the trash you keep talking is making me choke
you try to be dirty in your raps but you're just a clean joke
you're worthless man the biggest turd on earth
you think you're music will sell try to get heard once first.

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Re: Mat Demaz- Sea Of Lyrics (Freestyle)

Postby Mr.DGAF » Oct 9th, '11, 19:18

I like the first freestyle you dropped better, but this one is pretty good. Goes really well with the beat, I could flow to it nicely. The only forced rhyme, and this may be just me, was the toilet/annoying me less rhyme. Or maybe I missed something, but that just seemed kinda off. Other than that, not much else to say, it was a good drop homie.
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: Mat Demaz- Sea Of Lyrics (Freestyle)

Postby mdemaz » Oct 9th, '11, 19:27

Mr.DGAF wrote:I like the first freestyle you dropped better, but this one is pretty good. Goes really well with the beat, I could flow to it nicely. The only forced rhyme, and this may be just me, was the toilet/annoying me less rhyme. Or maybe I missed something, but that just seemed kinda off. Other than that, not much else to say, it was a good drop homie.

This is sorta a cypher cut really..The flow was brick walled.
Didn't let it go past a certain amount, haha.
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Re: Mat Demaz- Sea Of Lyrics (Freestyle)

Postby BigBoss » Oct 9th, '11, 19:28

Didnt like tune
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Re: Mat Demaz- Sea Of Lyrics (Freestyle)

Postby mdemaz » Oct 9th, '11, 19:41

SWEET_TOOTH wrote:Didnt like tune

Stanish tune is stanish.
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Re: Mat Demaz- Sea Of Lyrics (Freestyle)

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 10th, '11, 19:11

last two lines were my fave the beginning is sick and disturbing, I didn't like the sniffing farts line
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Mat Demaz- Sea Of Lyrics (Freestyle)

Postby mdemaz » Oct 10th, '11, 19:36

I usually just write w/e comes to my head, and sadly, that's what came in.
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Re: Mat Demaz- Sea Of Lyrics (Freestyle)

Postby BigBoss » Oct 11th, '11, 01:44

Ka0t1c wrote:last two lines were my fave the beginning is sick and disturbing, I didn't like the sniffing farts line


are you kidding me? what do you expect to see on the internet? ponies?









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Re: Mat Demaz- Sea Of Lyrics (Freestyle)

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 11th, '11, 03:15

no, just childish responses :whistle: however, mdemez, keep at it, like a crack addict :y:
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