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Re: Underrated

Postby Man1x » Oct 9th, '11, 13:53

Piece of shit....
Nah, just playing bro this was dope as fuck. That WoW line was amazing :y:
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Re: Underrated

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 9th, '11, 14:59

Man1x wrote:Piece of shit....
Nah, just playing bro this was dope as fuck. That WoW line was amazing :y:



LOL thank you man, Tbh, I don't know who might have got it, but that WoW line was inspired by a line in On Fire. :whistle:
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Re: Underrated

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 9th, '11, 18:19

it's pretty decent rhyming, i would like it more if it were more in depth, instead of basics, but i still enjoyed it. :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Underrated

Postby BigBoss » Oct 9th, '11, 19:09

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Re: Underrated

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 9th, '11, 20:39

Haha thanks guys! More detailed eh? Explain!
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Re: Underrated

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 9th, '11, 21:29

Cause I can scissor your lizard and rape your gizzards 'till your nips hurt,
Tempt me, I'll spit at 10-Speed and still outdo a Bentley,
I'm going gently, I hear the dead speak, wow dude, I think it's Kenny!
You faggots are huffing and puffing, and y'all can't even make it,
But I'm a bastard for cussing and cutting, applaud, I'm underrated.


I'm going gently, I hear the dead speak, wow dude, I think it's Kenny!

that was the only part outta those lines i liked

the rest of it looks like rambling to me
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Underrated

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 11th, '11, 03:36

Ka0t1c wrote:
Cause I can scissor your lizard and rape your gizzards 'till your nips hurt,
Tempt me, I'll spit at 10-Speed and still outdo a Bentley,
I'm going gently, I hear the dead speak, wow dude, I think it's Kenny!
You faggots are huffing and puffing, and y'all can't even make it,
But I'm a bastard for cussing and cutting, applaud, I'm underrated.


I'm going gently, I hear the dead speak, wow dude, I think it's Kenny!

that was the only part outta those lines i liked

the rest of it looks like rambling to me



I didn't think it was, but thanks!
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