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Mat Demaz- Born Dead (Freestyle)

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Mat Demaz- Born Dead (Freestyle)

Postby mdemaz » Oct 10th, '11, 08:23


Born dead in a fucking rad cask under grass
doctor pulled me up dad slapped mah ass
bitches on my dick because I spit soo ill
skinning motherfuckers like buffalo bill
flow is a tsunami soaking dirt mate
you're washed up man getting hit by my earthquake
I'm a god damn walking natural disaster
while you're arm gets wrapped up in plaster
I'm too hot I kick that fast rhymes shit
double-time snare and phat hi-hat hit
hoes on my dick because I spit
don't fuck with me or you'll die quick
I don't love you so start to cry bitch
sticking 9 nails into your eyelids
don't blink bitch and you might live
fuck it rip off ya skin and steal 5 ribs.

Advice to improve/modify would be cool.

LOF:
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Last edited by mdemaz on Oct 12th, '11, 10:16, edited 4 times in total.
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Re: Mat Demaz- Born Dead (Freestyle)

Postby BigBoss » Oct 10th, '11, 22:22

what the fuck no :facepalm
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Re: Mat Demaz- Born Dead (Freestyle)

Postby mdemaz » Oct 11th, '11, 08:30

No.








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Re: Mat Demaz- Born Dead (Freestyle)

Postby Words » Oct 11th, '11, 12:29

:y: :y: :y:
With the beat it was easy to tell how it's supposed to be read. Liked that, flowed really well. The only downside is I wish there was more :(
Good work though
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Re: Mat Demaz- Born Dead (Freestyle)

Postby Atone » Oct 12th, '11, 00:50

the beat is what made this freestyle work, i actually did this in my head to the beat and it flowed really good, the 1st 2 lines didn't tho
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Re: Mat Demaz- Born Dead (Freestyle)

Postby mdemaz » Oct 12th, '11, 10:20

The cut's done if you wanna listen:
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