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Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 11th, '11, 20:29

Zabe wrote:Always a disconnection,
Throwaway verse in the section,
Musta been Zabe,
Party-boying Sam to the wall in a rave.

:coffee:



And heeeeeere we go... :whistle:
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Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby Sam. » Oct 11th, '11, 20:34

If your so BumHurt then I won't be feeding you anymore. :y:
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Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby SG. » Oct 11th, '11, 20:36

Sam. wrote:If your so BumHurt then I won't be feeding you anymore. :y:

I'm joking, calm down. :sweating:
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Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 14th, '11, 19:25

Tbh, any time TRMadDistrict is mentioned, this should be it's anthem.


Now if only this was recorded... :shifty:
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Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby J.R. » Oct 14th, '11, 20:13

This is actually really good. Just work on your flow, most people struggle. I honestly think you both have multies down to an extent. You do however need to work on the placement of them, this made me laugh btw. So good piece.
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Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby Sam. » Oct 14th, '11, 20:16

B.Nutz wrote:This is actually really good

You can't give a one line Feed & use it as a LOF ,It's against the Rules.
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Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby J.R. » Oct 14th, '11, 20:20

I always edit after I drop. Check the post now. :sweating:
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Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby Sam. » Oct 14th, '11, 20:23

B.Nutz wrote:I always edit after I drop. Check the post now. :sweating:

It's fine man. Just a friendly gesture before a Mod warns you about it.
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Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 14th, '11, 20:24

B.Nutz wrote:I always edit after I drop. Check the post now. :sweating:


Just saw it. Thank you, my dude! :y:
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Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby Sam. » Oct 14th, '11, 20:26

How about Editing the feed that you gave me man .
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Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby J.R. » Oct 14th, '11, 20:29

Sam. wrote:How about Editing the feed that you gave me man .

No, Because See I don't really want to criticize you or spyder considering your both extremely dope. :wave:
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Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby Sam. » Oct 14th, '11, 20:38

B.Nutz wrote:
Sam. wrote:How about Editing the feed that you gave me man .

No, Because See I don't really want to criticize you or spyder considering your both extremely dope. :wave:

OH ! Is it ? Is it ? :toocool:

Thanks bruh :b:
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