[Track 3] Fuck-A-Lyric-Dick

[J.R.]

LOF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=131191&p=1786587#p1786587





[Verse 1]
Expect the unexpected, so when I flip up on you you'll expect me,
Left unaffected, By your shit, It's you Wack rappers I'm dissecting,
I'm cold, forget the defrost, Thanks to the hell that I sought,
Man, these Hoes are just lost,Lets go, no more thought,
I'd like to apologizes for disses, and bequeath all my shit to the love of my life,
Leave my mistresses spazzing in queefs, Forget to mention, B.Nutz has a wife,
The opposite of genteel, Gentle and Nice,
Make your wife squeal, when I mantle her hide,
My lines are so complex, you need an exegesis,
I don't understand your hex, Tell me your thesis?
Let's have a little causerie, Maybe some food for some thought,
Bitches best be applauding me, when they watching me walk,
They stalking my thoughts, Tryna pick apart the Nutz brain,
I'm cocking the glock, So they clean my dick of the Fuck stains...

[Chorus]
So Fuck a lyric dick!
I don't care if I rhyme,
I know you enjoy this slaughter,
Just give me my prime,
So fuck alyric dick!
My multies are sick, and my flow is the shit,
I'm the show,
Don't like it? Get kicked.


Call me the OD, I'll make you faggots wanna overdose,
Cause you see, I'll put little bitches to sleep, comatose..
Which is it, my balls or my dick that your stuffing in your mouth,
Cause I think maggots ripped into em, Thats' right, your suckin em out,
I grew up a bastard, A dick and bipolar,
Listening to the laughter, as daddy knocked mommy over,
That's why I'm stupid enough to do a track where I'm just straight A lyrical king,
Watching cats die, Love wasn't tough enough to provide, give me my Spirtual wings,
So fuck everyone but my girl, my family, and myself,
Cause there my world, Like gordon ramsey, I ain't got No one else,
So FUCK a lyric dick, I'm shoving my balls in your mouth,
Oh shit, I already said this, cmon bitch, dare you to call me out.

[Spyder]

you post this moments after saying u have no time to write

[J.R.]

you post this moments after saying u have no time to write

...Anything but my own EP. I've been working on this since the 18th of September, [At least in real life]
and have dropped 4 tracks.

[J.R.]

Will return feed given, give lots of feed and I'll give it back, give crappy feed, well...I think you know what you'll get.

[Sam.]

Content:Was new in some aspects ,but yet again the same theme of self praising .Please pick a new direction like Emo ,horrorcore etc etc.Imageny was a lil weak.

Rhymes: On Point.Multis were great needed a little complexity though.

Flow:

Refrain from using the word "Fuck" to much.

[J.R.]

Content:Was new in some aspects ,but yet again the same theme of self praising .Please pick a new direction like Emo ,horrorcore etc etc.Imageny was a lil weak.

Rhymes: On Point.Multis were great needed a little complexity though.

Flow:

Refrain from using the word "Fuck" to much.

Thanks Sam.
Let me know when you need some feed, everything you have out I've fed currently .

I can confirm track 4 is Horrocore.

[Sam.]

Content:Was new in some aspects ,but yet again the same theme of self praising .Please pick a new direction like Emo ,horrorcore etc etc.Imageny was a lil weak.

Rhymes: On Point.Multis were great needed a little complexity though.

Flow:

Refrain from using the word "Fuck" to much.

Thanks Sam.
Let me know when you need some feed, everything you have out I've fed currently .

I can confirm track 4 is Horrocore.

No problem bro.
The next drop is viewtopic.php?f=71&t=128715
Dunno whether I would be around to finish this ,too much Emotional things going on in my life.

[Mr.DGAF]

This is pretty awesome, man. The rhymes are seriously on point, not much to say there. But like Sam said, I'm hoping to see you branch out on your topics more. And you said your next track is on some horrorcore stuff, so that's awesome. I'll certainly be looking for that.

Back to the piece itself, it's really good. Sometimes, just a little, it's hard to flow to. But I read it a couple times, and I found a pretty good flow for it.

I'd like to apologizes for disses, and bequeath all my shit to the love of my life,
Leave my mistresses spazzing in queefs, Forget to mention, B.Nutz has a wife,

I liked this line, haha. Overall man, this was a solid piece, definitely looking forward to that next drop.

Return the favor?

[mdemaz]

Looks pretty cool dude.
I can't really drop much critique but basically what the other guys said.
Your content is hilarious, probably the most funny in recent history.

Keep writing man.