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You Don't Want War

Postby Atone » Oct 6th, '11, 23:53

Link Of Feed: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=129848&p=1777141#p1777141

since my next album is going to be 80's/90's style i figured i'd use that same style to go at Geno with in this

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TN2MQya1OCA

(Verse)
Look kid you should of never replied
now i'm gonna make you look worse than the day your celeberity crush died
and moonwalk on your feeligns bitch, rip you apart from the inside-
out, i'm about to break down the sound and your exsistance
and honestly i went easy on your in the Creative difference
but i won't be a repeat offender
so let's reverse it, play it, re-word it
check it out folks, ya heard it
Geno likes to Insert Venom in his anus
goin at me man you shameless
your a Demon? yeah they call you Geno Simmons of the new kiss-rock
use your toungue to lick cock, like "hey mom i got a new trick-watch"
bitch stop, i got no time for you, like a broken wrist watch
and you couldn't beat me unless i put my dick in your hands and let you stroke it
your hopeless, i write dope shit so take notice
it's over- the monsters awokin
no longer am i jokin
and marraige? faggot don't ya know whats goin on
players don't get married, thyats why ya dad left ya mom
plus you claim my raps are lame, i got no game but uh....
last time i checked my flow comes smooth like butta
get respect street wise- only one that loves you is ya motha
my style got ya shakin the way i'm breakin down the core
leave ya butt-sore, bitch boy you don't want war


and i didn't put 100 into this, i aint wastin to many of my brain cell's for a verse about some internet nobody geek who's only accomnplishment in life is moderating a stan website
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Re: Atone The Underdog - You Don't Want War

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 18th, '11, 18:18

This beef is still going? Smh, I thought everything was done now.
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Re: Atone The Underdog - You Don't Want War

Postby Sam. » Oct 18th, '11, 18:20

JamaicanPattlez wrote:This beef is still going? Smh, I thought everything was done now.

See the date.
[Rollefsen] - SajN retired, bitch got old, unlike Sams "ladies".
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Re: Atone The Underdog - You Don't Want War

Postby mdemaz » Oct 18th, '11, 18:27

He likes to insert venom in his anus?

You and your fetishes Geno.

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Re: Atone The Underdog - You Don't Want War

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 18th, '11, 18:56

Sam. wrote:
JamaicanPattlez wrote:This beef is still going? Smh, I thought everything was done now.

See the date.


Yeah, but I still sense some animosity here in CW.
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Re: Atone The Underdog - You Don't Want War

Postby Sam. » Oct 18th, '11, 19:10

This thing is old now ,no point in kicking the dead horse.
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Re: Atone The Underdog - You Don't Want War

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 18th, '11, 19:18

Sam. wrote:This thing is old now ,no point in kicking the dead horse.


Truth. :b:
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