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Re: Newer Writing Style Experiment #1

Postby Man1x » Oct 20th, '11, 01:37

JamaicanPattlez wrote:
Man1x wrote:always dope my brother, diggin' the style, can't wait to see what your others are anddddd we need to get started on our damn collab son.

Thanks and I know... Lol but I'm trying, I swear!

No problem take your time. :y:
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Re: Newer Writing Style Experiment #1

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 20th, '11, 01:53

Man1x wrote:
JamaicanPattlez wrote:
Man1x wrote:always dope my brother, diggin' the style, can't wait to see what your others are anddddd we need to get started on our damn collab son.

Thanks and I know... Lol but I'm trying, I swear!

No problem take your time. :y:


Cool. :y: It's me building the newer style is all.
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Re: Newer Writing Style Experiment #1

Postby Man1x » Oct 20th, '11, 02:38

No problem
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Re: Newer Writing Style Experiment #1

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 20th, '11, 05:06

Geno wrote:
JamaicanPattlez wrote:Haha thanks B. Nutz! Already did. :y: And lol Geno, think we could?

Yes, yes I do.


You know what that means, right? Now we HAVE to! :smoking:
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Re: Newer Writing Style Experiment #1

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 20th, '11, 06:31

not really feeling the basic rhymes, some just didn't look right or fit good imo, i thought it could be improved in many ways
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Re: Newer Writing Style Experiment #1

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 20th, '11, 21:43

Ka0t1c wrote:not really feeling the basic rhymes, some just didn't look right or fit good imo, i thought it could be improved in many ways



Okay, fair enough... what would you improve?
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