[Track 1]Creative Control- Our Thing

[J.R.]

Atone Feed:
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Nutz Feed:
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(Intro)(Atone)
Hey Nuts, let's get at em with some easy listening shit

(Verse)(BNutz)
Well atone, I'll leave these pussies Langour,
Felt alone, I defeat wussies On my court
There's no Gurantee's, When your Facing us,
Won't know Where to see, Best be Bracing up,
Your new favorite rappers, are Creative control,
Better quit laughing, aint no Debate in your soul,
I'm snapping anyone who thinks Fate is the foe,
Crapping on you, yet I'm Rated as low,
Parents and Teachers? I'm Hated by those,
Fuck the women and the preachers, Greater than hoes,
So study up, holmes pull out the Dictionary,
I'll be on my throne, when Shit gets scary,
Atone, Go ahead, Make em weary,
Bro, Teach em we ain't Fucking fairys,

(Verse)(Atone)
Cuz we keep, rockin and rollin in this game/
and we keep- just doin our thing
and we deep- pullin on your strings
showin you what we bring
tellin you what hip hop means
and we aint gonna stop
til we make it to the top
and we gonna keep it hot
make em talk
go ahead and say our name
tell ya friends how we bring that pain
never forget who we are
cuz one day, we gonna be some superstars


(Outro)(B.Nutz)
Hahaha,
We can outfast rap you,
Out slow rap you.
Motherfuckers,
Get the fuck up!
CREATIVE CONTROL!

[Sam.]

B.Nutz
Add the LOF the same day you post this ~ Rule.

Technically this was good,but you need to use different words to Rhyme "foe/low/those/hoe" is way played and overly used bu you in your previous works,can't pin point any piece in particular but yeah.

Good that you tried your hands at full line Rhyming.

[J.R.]

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[Man1x]

B. Nutz took this one in all categories, Atone your words were very simple and generic like Sam said. B.Nutz felt like rap, and I'm sorry but Atone, your verse was very popish in my opinion. It'd be good club bounce type of thing though. I just felt like it was a throw away verse.