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Random Shit, Ya

Postby Man1x » Oct 23rd, '11, 00:25

http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=132837

[Manîx]

How many have been crowned in the shrouding cloud that is down south/
That's why I'm proud when the crowd bows to my loud mouth/
Your down with me or you'll drown in profound sounds/ 
This I vow, even though I'm in a slouch crouched low to ground/

[Outro]

Nothing much ya'll, just wanted to show youzzz my dopenezz. Haha, just kinding this is shit, wait until the REAL shit comes out bitches :shifty:
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Re: Random Shit, Ya

Postby J.R. » Oct 23rd, '11, 00:34

So, dope shit.

But theres a requirement for lines and or warnings for short tracks or something, right?

Anyway, decent rhymes I guess.
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Re: Random Shit, Ya

Postby Man1x » Oct 23rd, '11, 00:43

B.Nutz wrote:So, dope shit.

But theres a requirement for lines and or warnings for short tracks or something, right?

Anyway, decent rhymes I guess.



Oh, I didn't know that
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Re: Random Shit, Ya

Postby J.R. » Oct 23rd, '11, 00:46

Man1x wrote:
B.Nutz wrote:So, dope shit.

But theres a requirement for lines and or warnings for short tracks or something, right?

Anyway, decent rhymes I guess.



Oh, I didn't know that

No no it's not offical, but one of my old threads got locked for being too short or something, I'd have to look it up. I was asking, gonna go take a look. Anyway, if you want check out I'm Beautiful :y:
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Re: Random Shit, Ya

Postby Man1x » Oct 23rd, '11, 00:49

B.Nutz wrote:No no it's not offical, but one of my old threads got locked for being too short or something, I'd have to look it up. I was asking, gonna go take a look. Anyway, if you want check out I'm Beautiful :y:


Yea, I'm readin' it
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Re: Random Shit, Ya

Postby Sam. » Oct 23rd, '11, 22:07

What's wrong with you man ? This is a serious space that you're wasting & where's the LOF ? :coffee:

Over dose of Rhyming ehhh ! Nice.
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Re: Random Shit, Ya

Postby Man1x » Oct 23rd, '11, 23:59

Sam. wrote:What's wrong with you man ? This is a serious space that you're wasting & where's the LOF ? :coffee:

Over dose of Rhyming ehhh ! Nice.


Sorry, I thought I put the LOF in. *Fixed
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