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Re: Newer Writing Style Experiment #2

Postby Mr.DGAF » Oct 28th, '11, 17:07

Oh haha, dang. I must've missed it, but at any rate, definitely looking forward to the next drop. I love pretty much every MMLP beat, so I'm pumped to see which one you're writing to. :y:
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Re: Newer Writing Style Experiment #2

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 28th, '11, 17:32

Mr.DGAF wrote:Oh haha, dang. I must've missed it, but at any rate, definitely looking forward to the next drop. I love pretty much every MMLP beat, so I'm pumped to see which one you're writing to. :y:


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Re: Newer Writing Style Experiment #2

Postby Mr.DGAF » Oct 28th, '11, 17:35

JamaicanPattlez wrote:
Mr.DGAF wrote:Oh haha, dang. I must've missed it, but at any rate, definitely looking forward to the next drop. I love pretty much every MMLP beat, so I'm pumped to see which one you're writing to. :y:


Haha fuck it, I'll spoil it. Bitch Please II. :smoking:



That beat is pretty fantastic, now I'll just have to wait and see how you go in on it. :whistle:
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Re: Newer Writing Style Experiment #2

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 28th, '11, 17:51

Mr.DGAF wrote:
JamaicanPattlez wrote:
Mr.DGAF wrote:Oh haha, dang. I must've missed it, but at any rate, definitely looking forward to the next drop. I love pretty much every MMLP beat, so I'm pumped to see which one you're writing to. :y:


Haha fuck it, I'll spoil it. Bitch Please II. :smoking:



That beat is pretty fantastic, now I'll just have to wait and see how you go in on it. :whistle:


Haha I went IN! :worship:
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Re: Newer Writing Style Experiment #2

Postby Sam. » Oct 28th, '11, 22:44

GameTheory wrote:That shit's tight man, sick flow and slick internals all across the piece. Flowed like a charm, and I can see why this is a new writing style cause its structure feels a bit different from your other work, and the style overall. It was a great read and a great concept, no real criticism. Good job. :b:

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Re: Newer Writing Style Experiment #2

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 29th, '11, 01:28

Sam. wrote:
GameTheory wrote:That shit's tight man, sick flow and slick internals all across the piece. Flowed like a charm, and I can see why this is a new writing style cause its structure feels a bit different from your other work, and the style overall. It was a great read and a great concept, no real criticism. Good job. :b:

This and this only, he said what I had in my mind.


Thanks man. :happy:
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