lawl that was some hilarious shit man ,as always what is said when you bend the words of a song in your own way it either is bad or dope but in your case it's a mix of both and many of the lines seemed forced to me ,some lines were dope but when i read it again it did make less sense like this one
"I made necrophilia once with a bitch, her name was destiny"
The whole piece had some ups and downs and they were really apparent bro ,keep at it .
Hope this is a descent feed .