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Nasty Minded (For Bizarre Fans)

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Re: Nasty Minded (For Bizarre Fans)

Postby Sam. » Jul 31st, '11, 12:25

lawl that was some hilarious shit man ,as always what is said when you bend the words of a song in your own way it either is bad or dope but in your case it's a mix of both and many of the lines seemed forced to me ,some lines were dope but when i read it again it did make less sense like this one
"I made necrophilia once with a bitch, her name was destiny"

The whole piece had some ups and downs and they were really apparent bro ,keep at it .

Hope this is a descent feed . :happy:
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Re: Nasty Minded (For Bizarre Fans)

Postby mdemaz » Jul 31st, '11, 14:30

So ill I transferred AIDS to my pregnant fine girl
forced her to smoke cigars to give birth to a dick with eyes that twirls.

What the fuck?
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Re: Nasty Minded (For Bizarre Fans)

Postby Maybe » Jul 31st, '11, 19:13

For a Bizarre piece, it was rather hilarious. I was actually able to read the entire thing in his voice and with his flow... it sounded like he stepped his game up, haha.

Good job man. :y:
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Re: Nasty Minded (For Bizarre Fans)

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 1st, '11, 15:10

oh boy hahah

thats pretti close I think, you just missed tongue-kissing Jhon Lenon and getting your asshole ate... lmao

but it was sick and pretti fucking Enjoyable
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Re: Nasty Minded (For Bizarre Fans)

Postby ArsheyHaq » Aug 2nd, '11, 05:32

LOL!! Wow, that was some pretty messed up stuff. Sounded just like Bizarre wrote it haa Pretty funny all around. I could tell you put close to no thought into this, which makes it allll the more funnier. Idk what to point out cuz it was all just equally goofy lol hopefully, though, next time I hope you write something with more seriousness. I don't want you lowering yourself to Bizarre's standards hehe

And you wrote this for Bizarre fans? You do know he has none, right lol
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Re: Nasty Minded (For Bizarre Fans)

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 27th, '11, 07:51

Lord have mercy, holy fuck...
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Re: Nasty Minded (For Bizarre Fans)

Postby K Reidy » Nov 8th, '11, 15:02

Most of the time, I wouldn't enjoy reading this but damn... you should record this :y:

I haven't written any horrorcore type pieces in a LONG time... but I just wrote my first one a awhile a little bit ago so thats why I was in the right mind state to read this.

That was dope, you should link me to more of your writings
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Re: Nasty Minded (For Bizarre Fans)

Postby Sam. » Nov 8th, '11, 18:21

Oh my, look at the retarded feed that I've given, makes no fuckin sense. :coffee:
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