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Fuck It All (Dissing My Ex)

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Fuck It All (Dissing My Ex)

Postby Atone » Oct 22nd, '11, 21:41

(Verse)
I'm a changed man
i don't give a god damn
shed a tear bitch i'll make you cry a ocean
flood the fuckin streets i don't give a shit about your emotions
you lie to me just know that karma's known to return the favor
and if your dyin in a fire don't expect me to come and save ya
you poured the gasoline, now you might as well meet ya maker
save ya last words for the paper bitch i hope i don't see ya later
if i see you again i must be sittin in hell i wanna find a heaven
true love, a real girl that won't make me crumble like 9-eleven
you came into my world makin me feel like everythings so right
played me like a fiddle and i didn't see it comin like i lost sight
now i open my eye's and see the truth like it's so bright
you never loved me, you just love the fact that you could catch a man
but you got greedy bitch and that's somethin i'll never understand
you find somebody who don't scream and beat you
who don't lie and cheat you, but you had to get a sweet tooth
and let your hunger defeat you,
Sorry I had to reach out, like now all my feelings are breakin thru
and i had to speak out, cuz i got so much shit to say to you

(Chorus)
FUCK IT ALL, I don't care anymore
breakin down the wall- kickin down the door
sayin what i feel it's time to let you know
i'm just keepin it real and i had to let this go
i don't give a damn how you play them games
this is who i am and i aint gonna change a thing

(Verse)
now you want me to be real with you let me tell you somethin
i gave you my everything and all you did was nothin
just a liar, a cheater, why should i belive ya when you say you loved me
cuz what you did was ugly
that was fucked up how you played with my head
how you said all them things you said
leavin hickies on my neck sayin it means i'm all your's
had you beggin me for more when i had you on all four's
when your daddy's in the hospital you askin me to come over
and you drunk at kim's and wakin up next to me all sober
cryin in my lap sayin you sorry for what you did in the past
but you go and do it again, fuck it, you can just kiss my ass
those other guys you kiss don't give a shit if you dyin
they'd fuck you and walk away and wou;n't give a shit if you was cryin
and when they tell you they love you, don't believe it cuz they lyin
they just with you for sex and thats why every one of em is your ex
but who's the one thats been there for you thru each and every step
no matter what but still you throw me back in the box
like a used up toy and ijust get dropped
fuck it, i don't need this shit, bitch kick rocks

(Chorus)

(Verse)
i can't forgive you for all that shit you did
but i hope you end up findin a father figure for your kid
truth be known that yes i did care, i gave you my heart
but you took it and broke it, you tore that shit apart
now i don't give a fuck, you got my ass sittin here in the dark
writin this fuckin verse like iwanna put my fist thru a wall
find every guy you cheated on my with and break their fuckin jaw
and i aint a jealous ex, i'm just pissed that you had to hide the truth
lied to me even tho if it came to the point i would have died for you
had my chest open wide these people wouldn't beleive how much i tried to do
just to keep you happy and sane, but you had to go and do them things
you had to crush me like i'm just another guy, you had to go and play them games
it's ok tho, cuz i don't need you for me to enjoy my life
i can move on and say fuck you bitch without even thinkin twice
i'm better off cuz one of these days your gonna catch an STD
and i get stupid and end up havin you in bed next to me
yeah we been best friends for 12 years but i guess it wasn't meant to be

(Chorus)





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Re: Atone The Underdog - Fuck It All (Dissing My Ex)

Postby mdemaz » Oct 22nd, '11, 21:46

Ethered.
Gg ex.
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Fuck It All (Dissing My Ex)

Postby K Reidy » Nov 8th, '11, 15:57

I write a lot of songs about my bitch ass ex's as well I can relate. I really like the chorus, I think it could be catchy if recorded, but not catchy in the pop way.

Are you planning on recording this at all? I'm interested to see how you deliver the full song.
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Fuck It All (Dissing My Ex)

Postby Atone » Nov 9th, '11, 10:19

yes, my next album will have this song, probably a different version with the same chorus, cuz my last 2 tapes have had songs dedicated to her in a love/pop shit way and i think my next album should have an update on how fucked up of a whore she is after everything i'v done for her.

i'v got 3 songs written for my next album so far, and from the looks of it, my next album is going to go deeper into my life, i have a song that speaks on the shit i dealt with in school, when people were scared that i would be the type to bring a gun into the school cuz i was bullied so much, it will even give a little insight to who my real dad was, when he kidnapped me, and how i'v dealt with suicidle thoughts my whole life, this time around i will have less cover type songs, like i'v done on my other albums, where i did tracks over beats that other rappers already made popular, i want my next album to be as personal as i gets,
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