Fuck off..

[ChristinaE12]

Just a short little something I've written. Messing around kinda shit as I had no real aim or purpose of writing this other than just writing shit down. Kinda got stuck/no time so I'm just posting it for the fuck of it. Hopefully more to follow or get this finished, anyhow.

Oh, and I hate fuckin titling my shit.

Here comes seventy "thousand" rusted slugs straight from these heavenly "mountains".
Veins are flooded drugs, I've hunted smugs before you can't outrun this.
Wannabe cold blooded thugs, Fuck guttin you I'd rather watch your brains infested
Inflicted with a strain of tested shit you cant fuckin mess with,
I ain't nothin they expected. But I'll be sure to be plain respected.
Got so much built up inside, nested, I wont quit til it's detained and netted.
All this pain I sweated. All methods been strained. So, Insane I'm headed.
Til' I'm Dreaded again, no regrets, no blame indebted.
I came to aim this flame and shred it. Claim the game, leave my name imbedded
You lames can bet it... All on the table and I'll never show shame or fret it.

I know the structure is off but whatever.. It's just a written.


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[mdemaz]

Wow, I'm actually impressed.
You have improved dramatically.
Just work on the structure and you will make an epic writer.

[RainMan44]

Just a short little something I've written. Messing around kinda shit as I had no real aim or purpose of writing this other than just writing shit down. Kinda got stuck/no time so I'm just posting it for the fuck of it. Hopefully more to follow or get this finished, anyhow.

Oh, and I hate fuckin titling my shit.

Here comes seventy "thousand" rusted slugs straight from these heavenly "mountains".
Veins are flooded drugs, I've hunted smugs before you can't outrun this.
Wannabe cold blooded thugs, Fuck guttin you I'd rather watch your brains infested
Inflicted with a strain of tested shit you cant fuckin mess with,
I ain't nothin they expected. But I'll be sure to be plain respected.
Got so much built up inside, nested, I wont quit til it's detained and netted.
All this pain I sweated. All methods been strained. So, Insane I'm headed.
Til' I'm Dreaded again, no regrets, no blame indebted.
I came to aim this flame and shred it. Claim the game, leave my name imbedded
You lames can bet it... All on the table and I'll never show shame or fret it.

I know the structure is off but whatever.. It's just a written.


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Wow, nah, structure seemed perfect to me! Flowed well, the rhymes were above average, I loved this. Great piece. Keep at it


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[Sam.]

What's with everyone taking up Horror-Core lately ? Chea ,this was dope and you manged to do it right.The only way that I could flow with this by breaking down the bars in two, saying the 1st Part and then the remaining Bar. You should have taken part in the competition,well I guess you had your commitments.

Keep slayin 'em.

[J.R.]

Flow, multies, all that shit was on my point. Really impressed at your improvement recently.

[ChristinaE12]

Thanks guys. Much appreciated.

@Sam - Most my pieces could probably be labeled as Horror-core. But it does seem to be popular right now. And I thought about doing the competition but ehh. I probably wouldn't have been able to. Not to my standards anyways. This piece here has been pretty much done for a few weeks now, too.

[Sam.]

Thanks guys. Much appreciated.

@Sam - Most my pieces could probably be labeled as Horror-core. But it does seem to be popular right now. And I thought about doing the competition but ehh. I probably wouldn't have been able to. Not to my standards anyways. This piece here has been pretty much done for a few weeks now, too.

I'm addicted to it tbh .If you have time stick around because my next few drops are pure Horror-Core.

[Words]

Structure was really a problem, it still flowed really well even though it was slightly off. You had some really good mulches that helped the piece. My only complaint was the length