[Track 9- Mini song] In yours bitch

[J.R.]

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[intro]

She takes the penis, and begins to sip.
She slowly dreams it, in her clit,
She schemes and hopes, one day she'll be his,
His semen is dope, she wants to be covered in jizz.
And as they finally get to the point, all they hear outside..
Is B.Nutz screaming in pain, "Your lucky your alive!"


[Verse 1]
He runs in, and begins to cut off his nutz,
Heart drumming, He sins by sucking her butt,
He's crazy, a maniac, lunatic and insane,
Developed Rabies and static in the back of his brain,
Maybe just maybe he should be shackled and chained,
He's abnormal extremely, He's Attacking the sane,
Anyway, back to the story, He cuts out her eye,
Everything gets bloody and gory, He smiles with pride,
Kills em both, but forgets the kid, the Child alive,
Nutz offer's him a hope, says "get Wild or die,"
Nutz act's childish, brings out his Mildish side,
In the jungle he'd die, gotta teach this kid to survive,
So Nutz rips off his clothes, throws him in the sea,
But he can't swim, so the child's Hope Dimmers with ease,
"I already killed four, let him live" He pleads,
And the child emerges and suddenly he's fucked up,
And he can't find the urges, he's been Roughed up,
He's takes the body of his mom, and begins to stuff up,
The arms legs and head, Fill it with cement and water,

[Mr.DGAF]

Rhyming is solid. I honestly am not a huge fan of the subject matter, but technically the piece is pretty good. Multi placement was good as well, really makes it easy to flow to. Not much else to say man, it was good, I've seen better from you, but that's just because I'm not to keen on the subject. I dunno why, haha, but yeah. Pretty good stuff.

[J.R.]

Slept on

[J.R.]

Slept on

[Sam.]

Rhyming is solid. I honestly am not a huge fan of the subject matter, but technically the piece is pretty good. Multi placement was good as well, really makes it easy to flow to. Not much else to say man, it was good, I've seen better from you, but that's just because I'm not to keen on the subject. I dunno why, haha, but yeah. Pretty good stuff.

Pretty much this, but the content could have been made more dramatic. The way this started, the ending was pretty flat.

Keep slayin 'em.