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Re: Newer Writing Experiment #5

Postby Sam. » Nov 15th, '11, 21:06

See the "Writers Vault" thread, Newer Writing Style Experiment #3" is missing. :coffee:
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Re: Newer Writing Experiment #5

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Nov 15th, '11, 21:08

Sam. wrote:See the "Writers Vault" thread, Newer Writing Style Experiment #3" is missing. :coffee:


I mean the broken Multis, but Hmm... I thought I wrote #3. Either I never wrote that yet, or I'll have to go search for it.
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Re: Newer Writing Experiment #5

Postby SG. » Nov 15th, '11, 22:26

I don't see the huge vocab as a problem, as long as you can give the reader a general sense of what it means. Aside from that, this is uncriticisable. I like how you're experimenting now. It allows you to find a style that suits you best.

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Re: Newer Writing Experiment #5

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Nov 16th, '11, 04:49

Zabe wrote:I don't see the huge vocab as a problem, as long as you can give the reader a general sense of what it means. Aside from that, this is uncriticisable. I like how you're experimenting now. It allows you to find a style that suits you best.

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