Spyder - A New Breed of Beast

[Spyder]

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=133866 LOF

Ive noticed no longer is there an ulterior challenge
They in fear when they battlin and could not mirror the talent.
A beast sear with the talons, burn ya in my incinerator
Amend the scripted paper encryptions disintegrate ya
Why bust? My lust tare your interior parts
Hard exterior but come to spar with far inferior bars.
In hieroglyphics my name reign as I was mentioned
Archives the dark ages, we the remains of violent wreckage
Shit inside, cords my veins and the mic is embedded
Mouth spit fire, my saliva is pyrotechnics.
War I bury the notion, demeanor the same though varies in motive
Barbarian chosen to bare the scariest omen
Come equipped to spit and carry explosives
Bomb squadron to off men
The beast you see eats at me, I can barely control him.
My heart fire, flip rip writer, dark archiver
Bar fighter sparks lighter start cypher to arm Spyder
No, you know my flow change tides
Crafted the atlas like Macgyver with deranged mind.
Watch me, see the ways that they taught me
Kamikaze Nazi, Muhammad Ali Ghandi
Thoughts got me scatter domed,
With nothing but nonsense and cobwebs in the catacombs.
Resort back to trazadone so you better make your armor
Cause if you don’t trade and barter you may be made a martyr.
Disease to your health, in need of a vitamin tablet
Ill shake this place like a hydrogen atom
Explodin, behold its an explosion of corrosive chemicals
Dominate monolith droppin decibels to better you.
Its common sense you cannot top this obelisk
Violent lion ridin iron hide
Violins orchestrate my thriving pride
Too outspoken to be monotonous.
I, arrive carryin scythe
Slit ya throat bury ya twice
Forever rested on a pillow,
Make your bitch a widow, ‘for you could marry ya wife.
I alter nations with altercations I aint fakin
I blow the picture to get your whole frame shakin
My state of mind be Hyde, invasion
You bout to Sea im crackin shells like Crustaceans.
A nightmare right there come in your dreams
Rip your tongue from the seems to hault your thuderin screams
Hard granite hand grab the planet
Part mechanical man crack the canvas.
Tarantula leave your fam split and damaged
Now your damn land is, ill and sick with famine.
Spew laced with cyanide to bust in your throat
Have you stutter and choke like after you done with a smoke.
Im chartin targets continue startin shit
Play with fire bars so the result, compulsive arsonist.
Anarchist, leave your damn bars split for testin me
Have em second guessin their destiny as best emcee,
I step to lessin your weaponry the second you mention me,
So any verse you drop’ll end in your vasectomy!

[Sam.]

It's a shame that such a great piece is dropped and no one feeds it after 20+ hours have passed.No wonder Fa-Q gave away his Color Name.

-On to the Feed-

Raw ass shit.

Seems more of a freestyle with some dope written lines, I'm saying this because of the structure. For a opening piece of the EP, this comes out to be a little weak, it had good rhyming and flow but the actual content was a little let down as compared to the other pieces by you. I definitely got the Punchlines and Wordplay but the verse lacked a appeal in comparison, it's still a 8 on 10 piece though but ..you know man. I'm not thoroughly disappointed at this and this completely goes with the feel of the EP. The only thing that you need to do is include some story like elements in long pieces like this, just to keep things more interesting.

Keep slayin 'em.

[Spyder]

thanks Sammie, idk why peeps sleeping.

too lazy too read a long piece.
and yeah this was a just go and rhyme piece with whatever raw thing i could think of.
i think trying to stay on one specific topic, like overkill, hinders imagination.
obv gotta have some direction and sticking on topic is great. some ppl just
concentrate way tooooo much on that.

either way two more tracks than this "ep" is done with and get my latest work out the bag

[Spyder]

buuuuuuuuuuuuuuump

[Sam.]

At peeps sleeping.
I'm so fed up to see this that I've decided not to drop anything except the collab's that I'm doing with you.

FUCK IT.

[Mr.DGAF]

Reserving this spot, gonna read it a few more times then feed it properly.

[Spyder]

thanks DGAF

and thanks Sam, i know its outputting, i still got one more solo,one with you
two bonus tracks which aint to big, but than that other thing


peeps gonna be sleepin heaaaaaaaavy

[Mr.DGAF]

Dang dude, you make me seriously re-consider how I'm writing. Something that always impresses me with your pieces is that the large vocabulary never sacrifices the flow. There were some seriously impressive aspects in all of this piece. Since it's so long, I liked the flow changes, I picked up on it really quickly because the way you phrase your bars makes it difficult not to flow to.

My heart fire, flip rip writer, dark archiver
Bar fighter sparks lighter start cypher to arm Spyder

Multies for that man, dang. Also, really liked the Kamikaze Nazi, Muhammad Ali/Gandhi line.

Good work man, but I'm really looking forward to see what you drop after this EP.

[Spyder]

thanks you suh

[Sam.]

Ive noticed no longer is there an ulterior challenge
They in fear when they battlin and could not mirror the talent.

And put a Cross on your chest like a Vampire, you eager to battlin
But my Reflections the same, so you cant possibly Mirror the Talent!!

.

Recycling?

[autotooner]

damn man.... This makes me embarassed at some of the stuff I have posted, this is crazy dude. I like the flow of the whole piece, and the multis made me.

I feel like I've got a lot of work to do... good shit man.

[Spyder]

thanks auto

and@Sam, yeah ill admit it haha, i did it a few times on the LP actually
but they have a different vibe to it with just the same expression

thats good you pay attention though

[Sam.]

It's my habit to observe things carefully and give feed or suggestions accordingly.

BUMP.