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[Ka0t1c]

Link of Feed http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=140435&p=1832785#p1832785

what we need is to be free and everybody should agree
if you could see the government's greed
look at us bleed just to feed our seeds
no man can succeed with the fee of the machine if your plan's to lead
cuz we're off track by debri, we lack the key
well i won't stand this scene, i have to breathe
so bring me back my wings and detach these strings
i've been hacked, it's like bee stings
time to attack their king in the combative's ring without referees
oh, yes sirry, it's necessary indeed, we're treated as refugees
read the magazines, the things actually happening's a scheme
and i seem that extreme?
it's sad to think we're rapidly sinking by black ink
then vanishes our dreams we're practicing
but the kinks are unraveling as we're imagining living happily
i sing, please pass the canibus trees but don't swing the cameras at me

[Mr.DGAF]

Wow man, this is some seriously impressive stuff. The structure is a bit weird, but it flows quite nicely. You had a hard hitting message with this one, and some of these lines are really nice dude. There's a lot of truth behind this piece dude, and I dig that. The rhymes were nice, you've really got a knack for multie placement. But yeah breh, this is a tight piece indeed. Props.

[Ka0t1c]

Thanx for your feed, hope to write more to this