Verse and hook I wrote a while back

[KS_1]

This is a verse and a hook and verse I wrote back in May for a track called Living To Die. May not be great but as the other one it is a bit old, not as old as that freeverse I posted but I'm sure you can see a little bit of improvement

This is my first record and it might be my last
If you dont like it I dont give a fuck, you can kiss my ass
Cause I wont miss my chance, I almost pissed my pants
From the excitement I have when I laugh
If you give me negative comments I will punk you back
I will turn around and tell you how you stunk in rap
But you can duck and laugh
But I promise I will finish you
No matter how many rhymes it takes, I will diminish you
Cause Im the type of guy that dont back down
Call me a wack clown and I will lash out
With no regret, cause you refused to show respect
Cause when it comes to spittin on the mic, I dont forget
And when it comes to large obstacles, I just throw myself
Cause when I come right back I need to slow my health
I just feel like I really need a break
Cause every night alone in my room, I just keep awake
I have a CD to make
And when you hear it, I hope you'll see my fate
And my destiny as I try to find my path
I hope I dont go to fast, slam the breaks and crash

(HOOK) x2

Fuck all you haters, Im Living To Die
I may not be the best, but I'll give it a try
Im Living To Die, motherfucker thats right
Im spitting these rhymes, cause Im Living To Die