Eedee - Help Me

[Eedee]

LoF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=145661
Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IazLexjFpsQ

*Just a quick 16.

I cum like I was birthed, bloody and premature,
But her snatch wasn't loose, wasn't slutty and she was hurt.
I'll take your money, you keep the purse, and just laugh ha,
Till I go home and whip my dick right into a cat's claw.
That's karma for you, man, though that shit isn't real,
Drug dealer to kids, don't fuss it's not that big of a deal.
What's realer than this? Oh, yeah, the god that I pray to,
He comes by with 10%, drops it off and he pays you.
Nah, that ain't true, cuz I'm just rambling, man...
You wanna feel alive? C'mon, gambling can!
What are the odds I won't end your life right here?
You want me to just sit here and pretend it's like, "I swear...
You're like the best friend that I always wanna kill,
It's nice but death ends our -", FUCK, I gotta chill.
I need to be put in the dog house, right where my pets be,
I'd scream but I have cotton mouth: "SOMEBODY HELP ME!"

[JamaicanPattlez]

This was pretty dope! The beat really did the lyrics justice. I caught the flow pretty easily, due to the beat. It gave it a really dark vibe which you were aiming for, and you achieved it well! Keep it up man!

[Mr.DGAF]

Hahahahahaha holy shit, the first line caught me off guard so much. Good drop breh, it was really disturbing in a good way. Flow was easy to get, the lyrics are always solid. Yeah, this is good stuff, I've got no complaints at all.

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

DANG another great one, I like seeing you write with more of a dark feel to it very nice! I liked this a lot keep it up!