Guess Who (Fiasco Day 8)

[Slim Fiasco]

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I and my twin sister attract eye contact, right boys?
Always half dressed we’re your hands favorite toys
We’re here to shake your head and bounce around
When you start whistling, that’s like the best sound
Some of our peers are bigger but some are so lame
So they get implants and try to build a better name
We’re a powerful tool, able to make shitload of cash
The face doesn’t matter as long as we get no backlash
Doing our work the best we can, it makes us relevant
When we go to them parties, we’re always so elegant
You cannot ignore us you can only loves us even more
So therefore make yourselves worthy and make us sore
But if you don’t have money, you will only get a picture
That’s if we even accept your friend request as a fixture
It’s us, the best thing you can see across the world’s cities
The reason every boy can go crazy, call us the twin titties

*the title has nothing to do with the member of the same name

[Slim Fiasco]

Hahahahahahaha lmao, ironically when I read the title I had this little thought that this could be about the member. I tried guessing what it was but no luck, it's pretty good how you managed to hide the object while keeping it obvious, awesome shit man.

yeah, I didn't think of her until I finished writing and was looking for a title for the topic, lol. And while it isn't a direct reference to Emma(?), the title makes it an indirect one I guess. I kinda chose that on purpose given that she's one of the few female members, and I wanted to steer some thoughts And again, thank you for the feedback. I'm glad you liked this!

I actually guessed it was tits after the first 2 lines, but then I was reading it and started to wonder if it was also about Guess_Who because you mention "eye" contact and "the face doesn't matter" lol, thought you were referring to her avatar.

Anyways, this is nice man! Even though I guessed right away, you had me second guessing myself as I read it, which is always a good thing to keep the reader intrigued. Solid piece!

Haha, you did good then. I thought the implants line will give me away for sure. And that's a whole double meaning about Guess_Who, hahah. That was completely unintentional. So anyway, thanks man, I appreciate that.

[Mr.DGAF]

Hahaha, shit. I liked this a lot haha. I thought tits after the some are bigger line. That was really cool man. The rhymes have been improving every drop, like I said earlier, this is really helping a lot of writers. Good stuff man, I enjoyed reading this.

[Slim Fiasco]

Yeah, I guessed after the "hands favorite toys" bit, I guess it takes a pervert LOL.

This was pretty nice, you did a great job, I like the bit where you said that they can make money and that the face doesn't matter, those were probably two of the more witty lines.

Haha, I guess there were more lines to give me up. And yeah, I was trying to made that statement in a subtle way, glad you liked it.

Hahaha, shit. I liked this a lot haha. I thought tits after the some are bigger line. That was really cool man. The rhymes have been improving every drop, like I said earlier, this is really helping a lot of writers. Good stuff man, I enjoyed reading this.

Haha, thanks man, I appreciate that. And yeah, I'm glad that this is as good as benefit as I thought it would be.

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

awesome drop dude, definitely Improving I liked this a lot very creative it took me a while to catch on! lol! way to go

[Slim Fiasco]

awesome drop dude, definitely Improving I liked this a lot very creative it took me a while to catch on! lol! way to go

Thanks bro!

[Guess_Who]

hahaha that was dope, great job!. I didn't guess it was about tits until almost the end, so it really made me laugh.

[Slim Fiasco]

hahaha that was dope, great job!. I didn't guess it was about tits until almost the end, so it really made me laugh.

Haha, thanks, I appreciate that! And I'm glad that you finally got around seeing this

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I had no idea what it was about, honestly. Good job.

[Slim Fiasco]

I had no idea what it was about, honestly. Good job.

Thanks bro!

[Gummybur]

Caught me off guard 100%.

I knew something was about tits when I read.

"So they get implants and try to build a better name"

And I thought that was all the tits in the piece. When I read the last line, It was a grab my nuts and run in circles moment.

[Slim Fiasco]

Caught me off guard 100%.

I knew something was about tits when I read.

"So they get implants and try to build a better name"

And I thought that was all the tits in the piece. When I read the last line, It was a grab my nuts and run in circles moment.

That's cool, lol.