I've Told Myself ft. Cryptic Wisdom

[Wreck]

Note: I wrote this song for the clueless people in life that need a clue about the little things.


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Beat- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GvujTiCCZME


(Intro- at 4 seconds)

Yeah
Anno Domini
Wreckless
Well I guess it's back to square one then
Fuck it
Let's not give this up yet, ok


(Chorus- Cryptic Wisdom)


(Verse 1)

Here we go again, chances down the drain just like a dinner meal
How does the winner feel? Fuck bad luck, this life's so bitter & real
You give someone everything, that they don't even deserve
& they won't even observe, how so this reasoning is cursed
I'm appeasing to the burbs, driving by it, waving good evening to the birds
Last night, a meeting w/ the church, racists bite like teething has occurred
I've told myself before, don't ever bite the hand that feeds you
or fight the man that keeps you, safe, understand & I'll teach youths
about hate, & how almost every charity's a scam
It's embarrassing, but damn, how the parody has advanced
What's the world come to, when gas is nearly an Abe Dollar ($5)
Stay in school, get pay, scholars, & be leaders, not A follower
Never talk unless you back up what you say in a thesis
I'm praying for peace, but still slaying the beats
& one last thing, respect life, & you shall reap what you sow
Otherwise, you'll be knee deep in a hole......pleading for dough

(Chorus)


(Verse 2)

What did I tell you? You should of listened, keep your ears open cause
Sometimes people are slow, but they eventually trust you, & open up
Pissed at life, broken stuff, got to focus, what
the fuck is this guy smoking over here, a fucking line of coke w/ blunts?
Weed can clear the mind for some, but stay away from the hard drugs
& stay away from the bar thugs, even if you have no money & your car sucks
Told myself, don't believe what people say, I'll find the truth on my own
Excuse me, I'm grown, life's unpretty, but in a suite & a bow (tie)
Done w/ ex-girlies, loved the sex early, on, but that's surely
a hex, 'cause at best? On to the next, I'll save that for the next story
I won't give in, conform, or confirm, & getting shit in return
or shit on, & burnt, depressed lately- even my writtens are concerned
Wishing for pot of gold, or a lot of hoes from rock & roll
Let me say: Life is like a pickup game, gotta make your shots to go
Bags are packed- & I packed a mag, to shoot all of my concerns down
Wreck you must of learned now, yes, all my worries are buried in ground

(Chorus)


(Verse 3)

Hoping for a stroke of luck here, or a heart-attack break
Lately I can't seem to keep my act straight, yeah I'm that crazed
& like Harry Kalas, I'm ready for a long-drive in life
Always got time for the mic, never watered down, I'm alongside the ice
Gotta keep the past paved, & the wit sharp like cutting grass' blades
& if you need guidance to find your purpose, please feel free to ask me
The mind's a worthless, thing to waste when you don't put your mind into it
You have no spine, when you get behind, a ruthless line of douches
Pass the wisdom along, like you're somewhat of a cryptic
Fuck it, I'm done w/ the physics, the guns & logistics
No fun when you missed it, the carnival free ride in life
So now you feel deprived, & suicid-al, & just wanna die tonight
Sometimes it's a crap shoot, but people may ask you
if they have to, pick on a innocent person, just to have something to laugh to
No hard working person deserves it, so make your pay & you'll earn it
& give away to the churches, I'm done for today, so good service

(Chorus to end)

[Emadyville]

the rhymes overall and the multis were dope as expected. The content was on point throughout. It was like you shifted at times but what you moved to was still in the concept, which was dope and shows skill. I def enjoyed it, not much more to say man it was was dope, hands down.

this part stood out with rhymes and flow tho:

Excuse me, I'm grown, life's unpretty, but in a suite & a bow (tie)
Done w/ ex-girlies, loved the sex early, on, but that's surely
a hex, 'cause at best? On to the next, I'll save that for the next story

[Wreck]

the rhymes overall and the multis were dope as expected. The content was on point throughout. It was like you shifted at times but what you moved to was still in the concept, which was dope and shows skill. I def enjoyed it, not much more to say man it was was dope, hands down.

this part stood out with rhymes and flow tho:

Excuse me, I'm grown, life's unpretty, but in a suite & a bow (tie)
Done w/ ex-girlies, loved the sex early, on, but that's surely
a hex, 'cause at best? On to the next, I'll save that for the next story

Thanks for the feed man, appreciate it, & yeah, I tried to deliver a strong message here, yet deliver lyricism at the same time. I'm glad you understood that there were many messages in this piece but with the same overall, important concept in hand .

[Block]

I like the concept and the 'clearing the air' vibe you've got in this piece. Your rhymes, as mentioned above, are really good and not forced like most. Your flow seems way too eminem'ish to me though. IDK maybe it's just how I'm reading it with the pauses and stuff, but it seems A LOT like him.

[Wreck]

I like the concept and the 'clearing the air' vibe you've got in this piece. Your rhymes, as mentioned above, are really good and not forced like most. Your flow seems way too eminem'ish to me though. IDK maybe it's just how I'm reading it with the pauses and stuff, but it seems A LOT like him.

Thanks for the feed man, & no, I don't model my flow after anyone's but myself, just to clarify.

[Eedee]

Note:
What did I tell you? You should of listened, keep your ears open cause
Sometimes people are slow, but they eventually trust you, & open up
Pissed at life, broken stuff, got to focus, what
the fuck is this guy smoking over here, a fucking line of coke w/ blunts?

This was my favorite part. It's true, some people are just fucking stupid.

Anyway, I liked this piece. Very real. Rhyming was nice, sometimes you sacrificed mutlies for the message (ex: dinner meal, bitter and real) and it's necessary sometimes, so good on ya for that.

Not much else to say, really. Solid piece.

[Wreck]

Note:
What did I tell you? You should of listened, keep your ears open cause
Sometimes people are slow, but they eventually trust you, & open up
Pissed at life, broken stuff, got to focus, what
the fuck is this guy smoking over here, a fucking line of coke w/ blunts?

This was my favorite part. It's true, some people are just fucking stupid.

Anyway, I liked this piece. Very real. Rhyming was nice, sometimes you sacrificed mutlies for the message (ex: dinner meal, bitter and real) and it's necessary sometimes, so good on ya for that.

Not much else to say, really. Solid piece.

Thanks for the feed man, & yeah, my Dad's like that, he doesn't listen at all, it's annoying & frustrating as fuck. & thanks, yeah that's what I was going for, I try to mix in realness & lyricism all in one, appreciate it though.

[Eedee]

^ No problem.

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