The Game (TR Shade Tape #3)

[J.R.]

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=147239 - LOF

Half Joke/Half Serious. You'll figure it out.

[Intro]
The Game's Hard to get into,
You can't be taught rap.
You have to have the ability.
Then you have to get better at it.
It's not an easy road,
and Not many survive.
But The Game's very rewarding..
For those that manage not to fuck up.


[Verse 1- Negative Perspective]
Yo I'm Sittin here tryin to be creative
Drunk on beer and lyin down deflated,
Writing to stan with the lyrics playin,
Biting off the genius that he's sayin
Reading the lyrics he made while I jot mine
Pleading to both spirits to be in the top nine
Take advantage of the chance if I got mine,
Once I'm there? Bam drop some Hot rhymes
Then 8 Mile? I'm in the plot line.
That would be straight wild, where I'm at is not fine.
The Thing I need most is more bought time
I can't afford even a dime, and theft's a crime
Lost in my own mind, and fucked by rap
Maybe I should steal rhymes, bluff my craft
But Summers gone, Time's wasted for me
leave this shit on another day to see

[Chorus]
The Game will Fuck with your mind,
Can you survive the rhymes and Lines?
(x2)

[Verse 2- Star Perspective]
Well Fuck, I'm the Best dropping Rhymes on Each coast,
So Rich I sell bucks and dimes to the people with these woes.
I don't really see why people complain about Rap,
If you'd stop weeping, you'd be on the fucking map.
Stop Dropping verses like Macdaddy with slurred speech and sound,
act like your the bitch and your husband Eminem is in town,
Project your craft if you really want the crown,
Protect your ass cause other rappers will burn you down.
Don't Rap like Lil wayne with 16 syllables here and 3 over there,
If you see you made an error, well, you probably should care.
If you still suck you should share, what I mean by that,
Is pull an ego, get a partner who cares and rap.
Fack, well that's the end of this simple guide,
I know I'm good, but I'm not Eminem in disguise.

[Eedee]

Interesting. No beat? Disappointed.

Rhymes were simple, nothing too fancy or impressive, tbh. But yeah... this was good. Simple but good.

Oh and you fucker, I lost The Game too haha

[J.R.]

Honestly, I was writing to stan. But with the lyrics playing as welll. Towards the end I was listening to Nocturnal rainbows and then went back and rapped it over whilst listening to stan, to make it smooth.

[Eedee]

Not bad, cool concept.

Like Eedee said, rhyming was pretty simple but you had some nice multies, my favourite was at the end too cuz it sounds smooth:

"end of this simple guide/Eminem in disguise"

Nice drop nonetheless

"Each coast/ these woes" was my fave, tbh. I like the way it rolls off the tongue. Like this:

[Atone]

It was pretty good, i could imagin this to the stan beat as you said, good story with it to

[J.R.]

Thanks guys

[J.R.]

Thanks Hesky, btw, any luck with the writers block?

[J.R.]

I used Stan lol and I'm pretty sure someone was looking at a club kinda beat..

So no