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Bonus2 [TR Shady Tape] Famous and Nameless (Atone's track)

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Bonus2 [TR Shady Tape] Famous and Nameless (Atone's track)

Postby J.R. » Aug 19th, '12, 16:43

(Atone)
Nobody here likes me so why do i write these?
maybe it's likly i'm crazy daily and nightly
or it might be that i don't give a fuck and you can just bite me
what are you retarded? i'm heartless i'll come thru and tear apart this
fuckin stage like a piece of garbage, til you treat me like an artist
let me- shine the light on you the same way i fuckin escaped the darkness
when i was stuck in a mode of depression, cold and just stressin
with so much agression i had to unfold and just press em
now here i am addressin, these fuckin issues if you just listen
i got screws loose and missin and pissed off i just flipped shit
i got so many things fucked up some of you would shit bricks
i remember when i popped so many pills and slit wrist's
and if some of you thought real deep[ about life you still wouldn't get this
but you dip shits judge me and place yourself above me
but i never even met you so do you think i give a fuck if you love me?
HATE ME, go ahead and say things, about how i'm crazy and weird
or whatever it is lately you fear, you fucks are just shady and queer
like a lady with a beard, but i proved that you can't phase me i'm here
still rockin a pink cowboy hat laughin back at you cuz you can't take a joke
makin fun of a picture? ha ha ha ha ha go ahead and laugh some more, that's dope
but i hope in that thread that you wrote you took some time to think about yourself
cuz of that fact you obsess over what i do, maybe it's you that really needs help
and some of you wonder who it is that i aim this
but i aint makin you famous you stupid fucks can remain nameless
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Re: Bonus2 [TR Shady Tape] Famous and Nameless (Atone's trac

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 19th, '12, 19:06

dope. couldn't imagine this being spit over a beat but it's a rocking acapella. good job.
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Re: Bonus2 [TR Shady Tape] Famous and Nameless (Atone's trac

Postby SG. » Aug 19th, '12, 20:18

This was nice. Completely different from the original concept I gave you guys, but hey, I'm glad you did your own thing with it.
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