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Catastrophic - TRShady Yo (TRShady Tape #10)

Postby Eedee » Aug 31st, '12, 03:30

LoF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=147908
Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e7ZW_m3f ... re=related

DISCLAIMER: None of the jokes in here were directed at posters in a malicious or negative way. They're only for the lulz. Please don't get offended. :y:

Eedee;Mr.DGAF

(:42) Yo, what up forum? How's it hanging today?
You hanging another forum rapper? Fill this place up with hate?
Will you take fucking stakes and crucify him in public?
Mat Demaz is dope - he used to lie? Shit, now fuck it!
He has this hope, gee, you'd be right to say he's sick,
It's like I came to spit by his side, I'm dangerous.
Oh yeah, Spyder, where's our sigs? We're the rap battle champs,
Catastrophic made you spaz out and crap? Can't handle that?
We're yelling burns at others cuz we came to spit nasty,
Your belly turns the color of the name on Big Ax-D!
You know who deserves shit? Atone wreaks the smell of it,
Listening to him makes Mahmoud's rap seem intelligent.
But we embellish it cuz for real it is this hellish shit,
Hearing it makes your face turn Blu, that ish is devilish.
I haven't yet started, but I'ma giving him straight-
Truth - you some Canibus logic, 30 pages like EminemBase!...

(1:38) I shouted at a thousand now it's all these random digits
How convenient, now it seems it's dope and really clever
Though I'm fed up noticing that posting clearly isn't special
So I better drop another shout so I can manage listing
All the massive bitching going on around the place
Went from "Em is shouting! Gay" to "Now he's sounding lame
Flow is sloppy, woah he's cocky for a dude that's out of pace"
How about we count the names of those who serve
The soleful purpose of unloading pics and gifs of Ye, but noone curr
So unfurr, when it's him it's great, I don't even need to listen since it's "Yay!"
Every time he spits his game, isn't hate, just an observation
Like the hostile way that Blu and Menzo start relations
No debates resolved when names are called and problems grow
The topic goes from talking 'bout a song into a slaughter show
Going of the topic though -- add a point, salty yo? -- add a point
Call me slow? --- add a point, Mod control -- that's the point

(2:25) Yo TR, we are the dudes that bring havoc to you,
We make you see stars like tiny chat Hop rapping to you.
Acting foolish in the backstage,
Aftermathers? That's a bad name,
Captain Tool-Bitch is the crap stain,
act gay, I'll have your ass nanked.
REAL TALK homie,
like saying we're quick to the rap game,
Steve Spag got killed in a sad way,
by FreeSpeech,
Called him a cornball,
destroyed him like Poland and Warsaw,
The path blazed, for Eedee
and D-G
A-F to make text a safe bet,
we see you quake: Yes!
Your face red like Lello
breaking into face sweats,
After chewing baked bread
, yo brah, you got your weight set?
That dumbbell isn't food, dude,
only crunch is from Lay's chips.
But props on the new diet,
it's awesome that you tried it,
Now go chase pink like Emadyville,
split verses like Co-stanza's,
A scalp with no dandruff,
we're no flakes but we stay this ill...
(3:16) There's no answer, say we're skilled and never question any drop,
We've planned assaults,
catapulting death threats like bigray,
Allah? It's fake, get played,
no need for you to get crazed.
Believe whatever fits, hey,
logic going every whichway,
If I stuck my dick in this mod's ass is the only way I'm in-SajN.

Every single section, the posting will stop at nothing,
Spamming their demeaning message, yeah but we gotta love 'em.
We got a love hate ship but it's our retard crazy home,
Come, stay, bitch, why? Because it's TRShady, Yo!!
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Re: Catastrophic - TRShady Yo (TRShady Tape #10)

Postby Spyder » Aug 31st, '12, 04:54

shot?

but ill have your sig, forgot tbh
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Re: Catastrophic - TRShady Yo (TRShady Tape #10)

Postby Eedee » Aug 31st, '12, 04:56

Spyder wrote:shot?

but ill have your sig, forgot tbh


Nah, read the little disclaimer in italics lol

And sweet. Thanks :y:
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Re: Catastrophic - TRShady Yo (TRShady Tape #10)

Postby Blu » Aug 31st, '12, 04:57

Damn... this flowed so smoothly... really digging it. :y:
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Re: Catastrophic - TRShady Yo (TRShady Tape #10)

Postby Eedee » Aug 31st, '12, 05:28

Thanks for the feed, guys!

@Menzo Damn sorry, didn't know you did a line like that already. Great minds think alike, eh? :b:
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Re: Catastrophic - TRShady Yo (TRShady Tape #10)

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Aug 31st, '12, 17:28

Lol Awesome piece guys, flow was good and rhyming was spectacular as always! Haha this was a cool keep it up!
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Re: Catastrophic - TRShady Yo (TRShady Tape #10)

Postby J.R. » Aug 31st, '12, 20:22

Geno wrote:Dope piece. I noticed you didn't mention me.

Wise decision.

This. Keep it up. I liked it guys. :y:
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Re: Catastrophic - TRShady Yo (TRShady Tape #10)

Postby Spyder » Aug 31st, '12, 21:41

Geno wrote:Dope piece. I noticed you didn't mention me.

Wise decision.


yeah dont get kicked out the first round again
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Re: Catastrophic - TRShady Yo (TRShady Tape #10)

Postby Blu » Aug 31st, '12, 21:49

Spyder wrote:
Geno wrote:Dope piece. I noticed you didn't mention me.

Wise decision.


yeah dont get kicked out the first round again

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