Eedee - "Fingernails"

[Eedee]

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[Chorus] (:23)
Your tongue is sharp... I cut you off,
Sometimes with you I feel as if I'm trapped inside a fucking box.
I can finger count the scratching out - this is Hell,
I cut you off but you seem to grow back like fucking fingernails. (x2)

[Verse 1] (:47)
You were the love of my life, my struggles and strife,
You were the bane and the reason I was touching the knife.
Something inside kept me clinging to your touch,
I'm empty but the whitecaps kept bringing me a rush.
I'm sitting here just stumped as to the reasons that you left,
Like that memory of you keeps me feeling out of breath.
I'm dreaming for my death with my back against a wall,
With that sensation that I stepped, as it happens as I fall
I'm capturing recalled, brain waves as I stare at you,
I ain't safe, painstaking blank pages like I barely do
Jordan, you broke my heart and that's a damn tautology,
I'm shriveled, cold and breaking, scattered... I've lost all of me.
I'm asking you to go, bitch, get out of my writhing mind,
So twisted, I know this is the last words as my breathing dies.
I'm being really prolix, I cut you off, I know that,
but wait for it....... you grow back.

[Chorus] (1:36)
Your tongue is sharp... I cut you off,
Sometimes with you I feel as if I'm trapped inside a fucking box.
I can finger count the scratching out - this is Hell,
I cut you off but you seem to grow back like fucking fingernails. (x2)

[Mr.DGAF]

Really like the title and how you played your feelings into that title. Made an overplayed topic more interesting, in my opinion. The verse was awesome, liked the flow in the first four bars a lot. I wasn't feeling the hook though, just seemed a bit off to me. And the line "as it happens as I fall" too. That kinda bugged me just because how quickly you used "as" again. Kinda not a big deal, just nitpicking haha. I like the piece though, the simile in the title and the entire verse was awesome.

[Eedee]

Thanks pimp.

[ilovebender.com]

This dark, gothic or, deep, tormented; I like it, for what it is.

[Eedee]

Thanks for the feeds.