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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby Blu » Aug 22nd, '12, 04:47

I gotta say Hesky becoming a VET then leaving shortly afterwards was one of the dumbest things to ever happen.
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby Eedee » Aug 22nd, '12, 04:58

InsaneTRex94 wrote:Lol this is great. Just wait "TRShady Yo" comes out though, I'm sure we can make something as good as this.


For sure. Find us a beat yet?
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby Slim Fiasco » Aug 22nd, '12, 09:11

Menzo wrote:The beginning sounds a lot like "Rock Bottom" too.


That was intentional though, and I figured it was obvious with the intro and all. The other 2 lines were subconsciously inspired :D

@everyone else - Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it and I'm glad you enjoyed it. This was more of a freestyle verse i.e. a freewrite with no intention to do something special technically but rather to say ish about the site, and maybe to give you guys a laugh :b:
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby CrashBand » Aug 22nd, '12, 10:42

Slim Fiasco wrote:
Menzo wrote:The beginning sounds a lot like "Rock Bottom" too.


That was intentional though, and I figured it was obvious with the intro and all.

Not sure if serious.....or being sarcastic back
I'm not tryin to be rude, but I sincerely wanna fuck the taste out of your mouth
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby Slim Fiasco » Aug 22nd, '12, 11:20

name wrote:Ahahaha this was pretty sick man and everything was spot on. Hilarious shit and its all on point, I'm surprised you're not banned yet though. :shifty:


Thanks man! And nah, they wouldn't dare, haha. :8)

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Slim Fiasco wrote:
Menzo wrote:The beginning sounds a lot like "Rock Bottom" too.


That was intentional though, and I figured it was obvious with the intro and all.

Not sure if serious.....or being sarcastic back


I was serious, and that's how I usually reply to sarcastic remarks.
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby Fleka » Aug 22nd, '12, 11:56

Nice. I love little raps about the forum. Had some ideas, but I don`t have the time to commit myself to writing enough to make it sound good.


Kez, chop off his dick, make him a lez
so when he gets excited over ponies he leaves no mess
grilling the ponies and feeding the bronies


tie Trimss to a table wearing nothing but kicks slitting his wrists
watch him bleed to death and taking some pics
got nowhere to post them TR no longer egzists


Dressed as a yellow rat armed with a baseball bat
Smackin rollin over the head till there ain`t nothing left


Guess_Who is recepcionist, night shift, head twist, neck breaks like a popsicle stick
take out her eye and mail to Shadyfreak


push SWEET_TOOTH in a phone booth stick a quarter up his ass
make him dial 911 then slam his head through the glass


I scribbled that long time ago, but never turned it into a whole. So, if you feel like doing it, it would be great. TRmassacre concept.
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby Guess_Who » Aug 22nd, '12, 13:48

Fleka wrote:

Guess_Who is recepcionist, night shift, head twist, neck breaks like a popsicle stick
take out her eye and mail to Shadyfreak


hahaha, I forgot he used to be Shadyfreak, sounds weird now. You were lucky not to have to rhyme with bazinga.

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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby Slim Fiasco » Aug 22nd, '12, 16:57

@Fleka - I don't feel like "killing" TR members, but if I get in the right mood sometime, maybe I'll put something together.
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby Nimation » Aug 23rd, '12, 09:22

Nice one bro... I enjoyed it. lol
It is not about lyrics anymore
It’s about a hot beat and a catchy hook
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby Slim Fiasco » Aug 23rd, '12, 16:24

Nimation wrote:Nice one bro... I enjoyed it. lol


Thanks man!
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby Mr.DGAF » Aug 27th, '12, 00:19

I like the intention here man, and you executed pretty well. The rhymes weren't crazy intricate or anything but that doesn't mean it was not good. There were some funny lines here and it's cool to see stuff related to the forum.
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby EvryOnesACrtc » Aug 28th, '12, 21:11

Haha don't get a lot of those lines cuz I'm not aware of the politics on this board, but it sounded funny. Well done. The rhyming was fairly simple, but it kinda looks like you're just messin' around so I'll let it slide. Otherwise, cool and different subject matter. It was entertaining and I was hooked. Nice work. My favorite line was:

"Going off topic? Motherfuckers, I'm going off forum
Taking name and dR3 with me - we the deadly quorum"

I've never seen forum rhymed with quorum so it caught me off guard in a good way.
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby Slim Fiasco » Sep 18th, '12, 09:15

EvryOnesACrtc wrote:Haha don't get a lot of those lines cuz I'm not aware of the politics on this board, but it sounded funny. Well done. The rhyming was fairly simple, but it kinda looks like you're just messin' around so I'll let it slide. Otherwise, cool and different subject matter. It was entertaining and I was hooked. Nice work. My favorite line was:

"Going off topic? Motherfuckers, I'm going off forum
Taking name and dR3 with me - we the deadly quorum"

I've never seen forum rhymed with quorum so it caught me off guard in a good way.


I don't know how I keep missing these posts, but thanks a lot man!

bigray wrote:Ha Ha this is pretty dope :y:


Thanks to you as well :b:
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