by Blu » Sep 18th, '12, 23:26
Bigray, the structuring in your bars made it pretty difficult to find the flow. But that doesn't mean the verse was terrible, I skimmed through it and I thought it was average, the message you were trying to convey was there.
Not really a fan of the hook tbh. It seems like the chorus is too complicated, just make it simple. Not to mention it's a high class example of the type of chorus a netcee would write...which is bad.
Geno your verse was all right. I didn't see anything that really stuck out to me...the flow was a bit sketchy too.
The beat, not a fan of either. The second I heard that piano loop I knew it was gonna be some emotional-type content. Broaden your production. Nearly most of the people here write to a beat, but the problem is that those beats are always too similar. It's always a looping piano mixed in with some chimes or something. I know you guys wanna write some heart-to-heart shit, but "Rock Bottom" wasn't written with a common, cheesy, piano loop.
You guys did pretty okay... 3/5.
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