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Point of View

Postby J.R. » Sep 22nd, '12, 02:24

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0PvY4U3xN-Q ~ Beat
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=148764 ~ lof
(Last 4 lines have like an accent almost.)

Shucks I'm just trying to establish a single point in this verse,
Point of view? Switchin from the third to the first, makin a hearse-
for myself. See I'm swimmin in wealth of knowledge of rap,
but I can't acknowledge the fact, I need help with my game..
and its driving my insane because I know deep inside we're the same,
but yet you diss me freely, and I called your group shit now I'm the joke?
No one can see it, makes me wanna just quit, tired of this fuckin' rope.
Nope, what I said two lines up is not a diss. It just bein open.
Yo B.Nutz is dead, cuz I can't be crazy no more, I been feelin broken,
Feelin low, because I can't record with the top four, see what I wrote em?
Killin flows and clock til I drop off the earth from this hurt and miserable hurtin.
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