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Postby Eedee » Sep 22nd, '12, 01:55

Just saying.
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Postby J.R. » Sep 22nd, '12, 01:56

Eedee wrote:Just saying.

Why would I read it?

Edit: not saying that to be a dick honestly.
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Postby Eedee » Sep 22nd, '12, 02:00

J.R. wrote:
Eedee wrote:Just saying.

Why would I read it?

Edit: not saying that to be a dick honestly.


Well you said you already skimmed through 5 lines. That's basically one third of it. Takes more laziness to not read it at that point than to read it lol.

But I can understand why you wouldn't read it. You dislike me. But I read and feed your stuff... but it's whatever. Honestly, if you don't feed my shit, I won't be mad. I'm still sorta pissed at you that you called one of our Catastrophic verse's bad rhyming or w/e when we rhymed the entire bar for a whole verse and you said we needed more internal rhymes... I kinda stopped taking you seriously at that point, if we're being honest right now.

Do your thing, no one's stopping you. :y:
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Postby J.R. » Sep 22nd, '12, 02:03

Then you were biased coming into this whole damned thing. You couldn't of taken this lightly if you fuckin' tried man. That's like you going into three of my pieces, not reading them, saying I can't rhyme worth a shit, then dissing me and expecting me not to be upset about it.


And to be honest, don't know how long ago that was, but I can't find it. Maybe it was relatively recent. But link me. :n:
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Postby Eedee » Sep 22nd, '12, 03:52

J.R. wrote:Then you were biased coming into this whole damned thing. You couldn't of taken this lightly if you fuckin' tried man. That's like you going into three of my pieces, not reading them, saying I can't rhyme worth a shit, then dissing me and expecting me not to be upset about it.


And to be honest, don't know how long ago that was, but I can't find it. Maybe it was relatively recent. But link me. :n:


Just because I don't like you that much doesn't mean I won't feed them truthfully. I read your shit and I fucking feed them honestly. That's more than most of the fucking pricks around CW who read the piece and don't even bother to feed.

I at least have that much respect for you to read your piece and feed it truthfully. If it sucked, I told you it did. If it was good, I said that. Read my feeds. They're honest. I leave my bias at the thread door.

In this case, your verse was shit and I told you it was. If you drop a good piece, I'll say it was good. :y:
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Postby J.R. » Sep 22nd, '12, 04:19

No, I mean you were lookin to pick a fight. I agree you at least feed . That's more than some people can be bothered to do
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Postby Eedee » Sep 22nd, '12, 05:03

J.R. wrote:No, I mean you were lookin to pick a fight. I agree you at least feed . That's more than some people can be bothered to do


I wasn't looking for a fight at all. You dropped my group's name followed by some aggressive and demeaning lyrics. How should I have taken that? I took it as a diss and went from there.
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Postby J.R. » Sep 22nd, '12, 06:41

I get that, I'm just saying that me saying you needed to work on your internals (which I apologized for) may have made you stick to your guns about this being a call out and shit. You get what I'm saying? Maybe I'm not saying it clearly .
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Postby Eedee » Sep 22nd, '12, 06:45

J.R. wrote:I get that, I'm just saying that me saying you needed to work on your internals (which I apologized for) may have made you stick to your guns about this being a call out and shit. You get what I'm saying? Maybe I'm not saying it clearly .


We rhymed entire bars. The internal is the whole freakin' bar....
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Postby J.R. » Sep 22nd, '12, 06:51

I don't even remember saying it and it was probably when I was still learning. All I'm trying to say is, maybe you could be using the fact that I said that, as a reason to not back down and be sure of yourself that this name drop was a diss, or meant to insult your group beyond saying its name, when it wasn't.

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Postby Eedee » Sep 22nd, '12, 06:52

J.R. wrote:I don't even remember saying it and it was probably when I was still learning. All I'm trying to say is, maybe you could be using the fact that I said that, as a reason to not back down and be sure of yourself that this name drop was a diss, or meant to insult your group beyond saying its name, when it wasn't.

Anyway, night.


Nope. The whole intro by itself seemed like a diss. That past feed was only the reason why I kinda don't like you lol.

Aaaaaaand night.
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Postby J.R. » Sep 22nd, '12, 06:54

Like I said before, just a way to get the groups in there and as stated by someone else, I'm open. If it was otherwise I'd tell you. Sorry about the past feed, I don't like nor dislike you.

Going to bed forreal now. Night.
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Postby Eedee » Sep 22nd, '12, 06:57

J.R. wrote:Like I said before, just a way to get the groups in there and as stated by someone else, I'm open. If it was otherwise I'd tell you. Sorry about the past feed, I don't like nor dislike you.

Going to bed forreal now. Night.


Okay, well the intro name dropped both our groups and followed up by a "threat", I guess. That's why I took it as a diss.

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