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Melt Haters (Emulation Day 1)

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Re: Melt Haters (Emulation Day 1)

Postby EvryOnesACrtc » Oct 7th, '12, 09:01

Damn, man, these Emulations keep getting better with every drop. I think I liked this one the best though! You made it look very easy. Loved the way you started it off and the finisher was fantastic. I enjoyed the Slipknot and Nine Inch Nails reference too. I can't find any lines that seem forced. Good stuff.

We really should vote for the best one. It might get the section more active by making it a little competitive.
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Re: Melt Haters (Emulation Day 1)

Postby CrashBand » Oct 7th, '12, 12:48

Not a lot I can say. Another solid effort. Great rhyming :y:
I'm not tryin to be rude, but I sincerely wanna fuck the taste out of your mouth
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