Bigray feat Silver x Sam X Slim Fiasco

[Spyder]

bigray, not bad. some end rhymes didnt match up and that threw off the flow a bit. little switch up from the normal scheme which was cool, overall pretty decent verse. who were you dissing?

silver, prob the best flow here. nothing too spectacular but youve been putting out so many verses it all looks the same to me now. id say once our track is done worry more about quality than quantity. not that its bad, your just putting out a lot and it blends togther.

fiasco, best verse imo. i loved the first four bars. the rest went a little downhill, the syllable count changed and threw off my flow a bit. but that era of errors line and what not was nice.

sam, you didnt fit at all man. they did like a laid back punch peiece and yours was a serious religious one.
the flow felt more like a poem than a rap and i felt like you may have been trying to be verbose. it was a nice verse, but did not fit the others at all

[Spyder]

mediocre
rodeo, have

[Just Silver]

thanks guy and ya it was cause iwas fighting off writers block lol im developing my own style and its more about inspiration than quanity

our work is gonna be topic related so quality

[Spyder]

ok then your not rhyming in couplettes either
gotta have even lines rhyme. your first three lines go together, the fourth goes to fifth
thatll always throw off the flow

but your basically rhyming
"oh" with "ker"

know, and mediocre dont rhyme man

if you said "know-her" then "mediocre" that would rhyme

[Spyder]

now idk what your saying.
to have a multi all the syllables have to rhyme.
the end of your words didnt rhyme

[Sam.]

I was listening to: www.youtube.com/watch?v=-h0xjPVdK3Q

If you listen carefully, my verse and the one in this song seems a tad bit same, flow wise. Maybe that's why you feel that way. I was writing tooo much EMO stuff for over a year and this was a break form that. First time? Yeah!

Being poetic in my verses is my forte.

Thanks for the Feed.

[Spyder]

Word that deff helped with the flow on that, but they were all using a different beat.
That's why the topic and flow didn't fit to the others.
It was a dope verse, just next time I'd recommend staying with the group beat, just to make sure its coherent to everyone

[Slim Fiasco]

@Spyder - Thanks for the feedback man, I appreciate. And I agree with what you said about the verse going downhill, but it just how it went when I wrote it

Salute to all the other participants as well, I liked what I read!

[Sam.]

Word that deff helped with the flow on that, but they were all using a different beat.
That's why the topic and flow didn't fit to the others.
It was a dope verse, just next time I'd recommend staying with the group beat, just to make sure its coherent to everyone

I wrote it to the beat posted by biggie. It flowed well, too. I know it's hard, but.....you're 100% correct at your end. It's all good. I was just inspired by the flow in that verse, and just decided to try it out.

I admit that my verse was serious as fuck. I thought I would wanna stand out, and I did it in a wrong way. I should have asked biggie for the verses given by others just to get a smell of what was cooking. Well, there's always next time.

Cheers Spyder.

[Sam.]

Whatever you say, biggie!

I can understand the flow/rhymes you had, man. I imagined different ways of puttin it and it worked. I thought from your point of view, though. Part of what Spdie said was true, so note it down. Good shit.