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Postby CrashBand » Mar 13th, '13, 09:48

Beat.
Link of feed.

Welcome to TR.

Welcome to the forum let me show ya around
Lemme introduce you guys to the ghosts in my town
Only problems you’ll find, the search engine will suck
And some members seem to have all the sections mixed up
…..cos while bigray tries to talk global warming
D-gaf’ll only post ‘bout a J. Cole performance
And coping with Almositly’s lame trolls are awkward
‘til the mods ban him, and show they’re so important
And that’s most the forum almost covered already
Surely there’s more things to it that I must be forgetting
Well there’s always the stupid fucking stans on the board
Amadeo proving their idiocy’s just a matter of course
‘I’m Back’,‘The Way I Am’ had the old Eminem,
Bring back Slim Shady
”, even though he told them it’s him
Then Menzo notices rhymes in the titles I mentioned
And puts forth a hypothesis on how they’re likely intended
Geno’ll jump in and just misunderstand
And they’ll both argue against a different issue at hand
Abram seems to be neutral, especially how he delivers
Apart from his stance on if we’re allowed to say nigger
Willy and SliK then explain the actual words are not bad
We’ll call a spade a spade and a gay person a fag
Class tryna show us all how he don’t give a fuck
‘til you take away his colour, shit, he’ll die before he gives that up
..Fiasco’s sig, you can read about his mags
He can’t speak English, but he’ll teach you how to rap
Kathy will go into depth on what she thinks she’s valued at
Hesky’ll spam Ces-Cru, even though it seems the albums crap
So this site’s gonna give you many lemons to juice
It has everything to offer….except Eminem news
And that’s the problem... the forums dying without it
No one cares, so I spent an hour writing about it


NB: Everything's meant to taken in jest. :flower:
Last edited by CrashBand on Mar 13th, '13, 10:54, edited 3 times in total.
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Postby DƎRDYPK » Mar 13th, '13, 09:54

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Postby SliK » Mar 13th, '13, 10:00

I thoroughly enjoyed this lol
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Postby SliK » Mar 13th, '13, 10:24

Then you have CrashBand and his New Zealand wit
some members'll claim they just aren't "feelin it"
Or they're not agreeing with his view on the board
But after that effort, man, you're due an applause
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Postby Fleka » Mar 13th, '13, 10:37

I liked this one even though you kiss the ass of Amadeo.
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Postby Mr.DGAF » Mar 13th, '13, 13:11

Hahaha. This was nice man. I laughed a couple times, but i think my favorite line was the fiasco one. And the abram line haha. I enjoyed it.
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Postby Just Silver » Mar 13th, '13, 15:20

i really liked this one flows consistent nothing forced and tells TR to get active again
name dropping was fun to read too

8.5/10
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Postby PAINKILLƎR » Mar 13th, '13, 16:08

My favorite piece in a long time, this was really great. Props CrashBand. :b:
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Postby Blu » Mar 13th, '13, 20:59

Fuck you for not name dropping me.

Just kidding. Great verse. Really enjoyed it :b:
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Postby Willy » Mar 18th, '13, 02:12

Then Menzo notices rhymes in the titles I mentioned
And puts forth a hypothesis on how they’re likely intended

No offense to Menzo but lol
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Postby Eedee » Mar 20th, '13, 00:37

This was pretty fun to read. I remember DGAF and I did something similar for JR's Summer Tape thing.

Rhyming and flow was damn near perfect, it felt so good to read out-loud. Good job, Crash.
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Postby Slim Fiasco » Mar 27th, '13, 19:11

Hahah, damn, this was awesome man, too bad I hadn't seen it earlier. I loved/laughed at couple of lines, especially mine and the one about no eminem news. Much props!
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