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Caffeine

Postby Just Silver » Mar 10th, '13, 00:32

Feed: Slim Fiasco- Vietnam plz *Copy N Paste

No more weed so pour caffeine
Substitute for me but isnt everlasting
Thatd be the last thing,id blast things,at me
Suicide do or die, dealers provide bags chiefed
Either ill have weed, or the day turns to last week
When i was so bored i punched both boards in my door
Some of it was anger,aggression and stressing
But my behavior is usually selected by methods
Of highness my high can get me by this
Shouldnt be biased your whole life theyve been lying
Thats everyone,blast every gun killed age of one,infant
Shits i still dont give it,fingers been flipped, where im winning
Envisioning you behind with the victims
Enticed with the price of life smoke spice forgiveness
Never for my sins, for god i dont believe in
Profit of a demon drug schemes for bud
In a sweater grab whatever cuz im under the weather
In the house on the couch comin up with somethin clever
Its now or never however im down with an ember,to my blunt
Somethings up,topic switched from,caffeine to smoking skunk
And lines so long my time is up, bought the hybrid stuff
Shouldnt write this much ,eyes avoid it like the sun
But at least its liked by one, destroyed myself with the gun..
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Re: Caffeine

Postby Just Silver » Mar 10th, '13, 01:23

thanks guy for the feed
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Re: Caffeine

Postby Just Silver » Mar 11th, '13, 01:23

Bump nd last
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Re: Caffeine

Postby Just Silver » Apr 11th, '13, 18:34

juzt kidding last bump and im writing something with more meaning
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Re: Caffeine

Postby ilovebender.com » Apr 14th, '13, 01:10

Hyper...
I'm from South London from Westminster to the back streets of Thornton Heath.
Off Brigstock Road.

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Re: Caffeine

Postby Just Silver » Apr 14th, '13, 01:12

lol thanks for the legal bump
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Re: Caffeine

Postby tadpole25 » Apr 15th, '13, 01:05

you've improved. nice vocabulary, good multis. i have an affinity toward benign psychoactive drugs, but there's a message here without being too preachy. good job
"I take yall diss as endearment - I love it when I hear it
Maybe words offensive - free speech I don't fear it
Maybe music can take us to a place so atmospheric
Beyond our greatest imagination, illuminatin' experience
If we open our ears and close our inhibitions, it's clear"
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