Pike and My Axe by Tadpole

[tadpole25]

Somewhat random freestyle. My brief return to the TR rap game.

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Loveable whack outcast of the rap society's back
With Bars that leave your ass with anxiety attacks
Sometimes I like to relax, drop my pike and my axe
And write down the facts without a mic and a track
At times I return for delight, but rap season is over
Couldda had you bleedin all over, and your "G's in a coma
As I scream nice to know ya, but I'm done with that shit
Yeah I'm clean and I'm sober, ain't touch the weed like i'm Hova
Don't need no trees to get toked up with the police on my shoulder

No need for my ex, as she plead for a sec - ond chance I said damn
it I won't re-live your regrets, so I was placing my bets
She was facing her debts, and I turned the tables on her
When we played russian roulette, except a helmet and vest
to cover my pride, as the pain she dealt eats her inside
And yes, I forgive I forget, that shit most of the time
But I'm human, this shit can rise in my mind again - don't know why
To my friends I confide, the kind that dispense the lies
That I'm smart against, sometimes I'm dumb it comes at my expense
But I learn my lessons again before I'm stressed yet again
And spend my days recluded away, afraid of the tense
Issues that come in my face, I ain't gonna run away
like yesterday, apply the pressure, the now is someday

[Spyder]

please paste the link, dont just say you did it.

silver does this because he only has a portable playstation and cant actually paste the link

[tadpole25]

sorry, here you go

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=155224

what do you guys think

[Spyder]

thank you

and it was decent man, topic was just kinda a random laid back verse.
but the multies and flow was nice. rhyming. everything was there for this style verse.
nothing stuck out, but nothing "bad"