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Eedee - "Once In A While" (TR Tape 2) (Text + Audio)

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Eedee - "Once In A While" (TR Tape 2) (Text + Audio)

Postby Eedee » Jul 9th, '13, 12:47

LoF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=161758#p2235416

Audio: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=161801

Sorry the beat I used isn't uploaded anywhere, so you'll have to read deaf until you listen to the audio. :y:

ONCE IN A WHILE

Doing this rap shit thieves me of my inner angst,
You insist that which always leaves me with a bitter taste.
That cold smile freezing in this picture frame,
Rudimentary living, I need to find a different way.
I came with it, breathing in a little shame,
Looking up to dark clouds, keeping it in frigid rain.
In a time-out, my mouth stays shut,
This ain't what I wanted, they like downplayed what
I was trying to prove, shoo, outta their way
My lungs fill up with tears and now I'm drowning in pain.
They've crowned me insane, and I've scoured the Earth,
For the stupid silver lining that was found in my worth.
It's just in the heat of the moment that I speak to the frozen
Feelings within me that unthaw and I know it.
I think I could say that sometimes it's my best friend,
But Once In A While I like to sigh with my next breath.
But the truth is...
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Re: Eedee - "Once In A While" (TR Tape 2) (Text + Audio)

Postby Eedee » Jul 28th, '13, 02:39

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Re: Eedee - "Once In A While" (TR Tape 2) (Text + Audio)

Postby J.R. » Jul 28th, '13, 06:52

I really liked it, the flow was nice and you did well. I like your voice too!
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Re: Eedee - "Once In A While" (TR Tape 2) (Text + Audio)

Postby Eedee » Jul 28th, '13, 06:54

J.R. wrote:I really liked it, the flow was nice and you did well. I like your voice too!


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