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Geno - On And On

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Re: Geno - On And On

Postby Just Silver » Jul 27th, '13, 17:01

phrasing was nice and this little back n forth stuff is pretty interesting

lol at long john silver

and the lines near the end were pretty creative

the last line however about spider web tats usually its a sign of being in jail for a long period

overall real good shit 8.4/10
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Re: Geno - On And On

Postby Just Silver » Jul 27th, '13, 21:19

lol keep at it the activity is awesome
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Re: Geno - On And On

Postby Spyder » Jul 28th, '13, 03:16

I didn't know Japanese porn had tentacles...

That imaginary dick line was kinda cringe. I've seen better from you bro
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Re: Geno - On And On

Postby Spyder » Jul 28th, '13, 04:00

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Re: Geno - On And On

Postby Eedee » Jul 28th, '13, 10:23

Lol this was a fun read, Geno.

This was a Spyder diss, right?
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