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Just Silver ft. Eedee - "TRench Coats"

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Just Silver ft. Eedee - "TRench Coats"

Postby Eedee » Aug 1st, '13, 05:11

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Disclaimer: This is not meant as a diss track, but just a fun track using some names.
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Remember in September when your back in session
Me and Eedee both have suffered from depression
Our plans are drawn up like Kebold in the ninetys
Got the guns ammunition and bomb timing
Were all riding until there isnt even half a jock
Meet me at 12 oclock look whats in this bag i brought
A brand new shotgun it hasnt been shot
Plus some escape plans if were caught by the cops
Welcome to TR high as we enter in the trenchcoats
You know we arent dry even got expensive scopes
Looked through mine all i saw was Trimss nose
Shot it whole and proceeded to the soccer goals
Eedee gets Pain with his stainless he doesnt remain quick
Im back inside with all panic and mayhem
Found insane and sprayed him right near the pavement
He was trying to run his mouth but couldnt run away with it
Eedee has been on the campus this whole time
doin his own thing fuck virginia and a columbine


Sorry Silv, I just saw Pain, he almost sped ahead
So excuse me while I chase him, I ain't dead him yet.
"HEY PAIN! I have a picture of Emma to post!
Stop running! You cannot even pretend you're a ghost!
You turned your back on Emma!
" Have some hours to mull it-
Over, so *bang*, WHEW! What a powerful bullet.
I smelled something dank, and I must be insane,
The fucking wanker, alright, but I ain't shoot bigray.
This day is full of bloodshed, the hallways run red
Silver and I causin' havoc is always fun? Yes.
I reloaded my mag and pounced onto Geno
But Menzo came to shield him and it bounced off their Ego.
I see an Ariana Grande folder strewn, I hear cries
From around the corner, I know Hage must be nearby.
I give him a pass, and I walk up to Just,
And give him a mean dap like shots are a must.


Shots are a must these bombs can drop a whole bus
Fuck optimus were in our prime about to bust
Ithink the cops are here cause they heard the fuss
Ran ducked by a bus that was backin up
Satchel stuffed with the shit that needs a "pack a punch"
Seen the europeans i didnt bother for the names
Since i ran out the school with hollows and grenades
Shot them in the face some were still in a safe place
Till i switched pace went back inside on a sick chase
With a switch blade that was swiss made make u piss stain
And they all bleeding in agony screaming "somebodys stabbin me"
Im coming after athe-letes cause its somewhat challenging
Feeling like a god but inside an empty battery
The cops are coming for me tryin to straddle me
Now im back to reality i may face a badge and fees
I dont think they found eedee i was in the library
When they found me and tried to shoot every
shot, whether or not a red dot precision
My last thought and decision i dont care if im living


TR-Fadey, life's fadin' with the shots,
All the new members wonderin' if it's dangerous or not.
We'll fuckin' roast ya, add some gravy to the pot,
Dead bodies in the chairs like they're savin' us a spot.
Someone must've tattled cuz I hear the sirens blare,
Looking for a final fare, actin' like I am scared.
I see ViJilance shocked from this planned attack,
I shoot his knees and remember not to help the handicapped.
Fucking faggot chap, but the wails are lookin' red
They must be coming closer so I decide to book instead.
I hear someone yelling "Eedee! Come this way!"
I thought it was Silver but instead it's just bigray.
Silver must've got out, I don't see him anywhere,
Thinkin' to myself it's time to flee, I'm gettin' scared.
The police corner us, figured I would plea confession
But instead they arrest bigray for his weed possession.

(Jeez, I'm messin')
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Re: Just Silver ft. Eedee - "TRench Coats"

Postby Just Silver » Aug 2nd, '13, 03:45

needs a little bump
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Re: Just Silver ft. Eedee - "TRench Coats"

Postby Just Silver » Aug 2nd, '13, 03:54

thanks guy i was in a columbine documentary mood recently lol
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Re: Just Silver ft. Eedee - "TRench Coats"

Postby Eedee » Aug 2nd, '13, 07:29

Thanks Hage. :flutter:
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Re: Just Silver ft. Eedee - "TRench Coats"

Postby CanadaPure » Aug 2nd, '13, 07:34

Hage wrote:lmao this is great, you guys should record this tbh



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Hage, I warned you about posting this out of backstage, and gave you the option of resizing it to emoticon size (and I gave you an example of the sizing) if you wanted to use it. Sorry, but that's a point which brings you up to three and a week ban.

I saw you post it somewhere else today too, but I tried to remove it so you wouldn't get a point leading to the ban over something this stupid.
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Re: Just Silver ft. Eedee - "TRench Coats"

Postby Just Silver » Aug 5th, '13, 20:25

final bump need feed :(
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Re: Just Silver ft. Eedee - "TRench Coats"

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 7th, '13, 09:01

Cool drop, I like how you dedicated a whole piece to that one Pain guy. It was a fun read, really love how Eedee went about haha that was awesome. The rhyming was nice from both of you, the flow was good. Good stuff.
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Re: Just Silver ft. Eedee - "TRench Coats"

Postby Eedee » Aug 7th, '13, 09:02

I meant no harm by it, Pain. I had to go off what he already wrote haha.

You know I lud ya.
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Re: Just Silver ft. Eedee - "TRench Coats"

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 7th, '13, 09:07

I made a diss so sinister that I started going to church again because I felt so bad about that lethal diss I wrote on you guys. So I throw my piece into a fire and man unholy spirits and demons came flying out when I did so. Shit was cray.

Don't worry, I didn't take it personally. I don't feel bad about this. I genuinely like the piece you guys did. I'm actually still gonna murk silver doe.
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Re: Just Silver ft. Eedee - "TRench Coats"

Postby Eedee » Aug 7th, '13, 09:27

Lol. Those demons, though.
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Re: Just Silver ft. Eedee - "TRench Coats"

Postby Just Silver » Aug 7th, '13, 12:16

lol it wasnt all about that pain guy others were there like Trimms and insane etc
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Re: Just Silver ft. Eedee - "TRench Coats"

Postby Eedee » Aug 7th, '13, 15:17

I know but I chased pain down and shot him dead yo
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Re: Just Silver ft. Eedee - "TRench Coats"

Postby Just Silver » Aug 7th, '13, 15:19

yea while playin soccer :o

then i killed Trex but first thing that went was Trimms nose
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Re: Just Silver ft. Eedee - "TRench Coats"

Postby Eedee » Aug 7th, '13, 15:24

You think this is a big joke????
There's a -- laying dead with Trimss nose!
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Re: Just Silver ft. Eedee - "TRench Coats"

Postby Just Silver » Aug 18th, '13, 21:47

slept on :(
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