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armed again keystyle(subliminal)

Postby Just Silver » Aug 5th, '13, 17:21

feed- freestyle not friday Spyder

Got a whole team of guns only gotta pair of hands
Better call an ambulance to stand a chance
Acid rapping with a multicolored camo for a mac
Eatem for a snack smothered with ammo no plastic crap
You dont know the half of the fraction smooth no traction
So i move with tire grooves that are shaped like you faggots
And hit all with a massive car crash and keep laughin
Such a comedian oncoming median traffic
See them goin but im already passed them
Staying an addict like the top of a mansion
meaning its more like pot expansion
Making my thought process sporadic
So fuck the nonsense audience just clap it
Audios in scripts that have no wits to match it
And if they did shit hed be a sick bastard
Thought i was down and out like a hangover
Make an average joe a sloppy one before im sober
As far as stabbings go i stop the incoming opponent
Supervillian no match for the power of focus
Already extinct and im three years older
its whaever just keepin it rollin
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Re: armed again keystyle

Postby Just Silver » Aug 6th, '13, 23:20

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Re: armed again keystyle

Postby Just Silver » Aug 9th, '13, 02:24

last final bump till new piece
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Re: armed again keystyle

Postby Halftongue Dre » Aug 12th, '13, 06:20

Wow Silver your getting much better. Keep it up bro. Not talking about anything real though but its always fun to just rant sometimes..
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Re: armed again keystyle

Postby Just Silver » Aug 12th, '13, 12:48

yea i know lol it was just a keystyle i feel subjects sometimes make me slow my writing down since itd be a story and gotta tie up loose ends
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Re: armed again keystyle

Postby Halftongue Dre » Aug 13th, '13, 07:50

Nice. Well keep writing man you can only get better..
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Re: armed again keystyle

Postby Just Silver » Aug 13th, '13, 14:44

yea i will once i have good reading time to send feed lol i gotta practice
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Re: armed again keystyle

Postby Just Silver » Aug 18th, '13, 23:48

last bump then nxt project
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Re: armed again keystyle(subliminal)

Postby Just Silver » Aug 19th, '13, 00:10

thanks guy and yea id say i go faster than slower most times :y:
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