Vent

[VintageSlimBish]

See the meaning of it all was, to see if I could stick it out,
Though the cards dealt were against me, i had it figured out.
Knew as long as I could be the man, my father never was,
I didn't have to worry Bout the fact, that It'd ever fall apart.
Guess I was stupid, still infused with, the pain thats in my heart,
Cause you were lucid, now your gone, see these colors fill the dark

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[CanadaPure]

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[mdemaz]

Looks good so far.

You should do this song to a piano instrumental or something.