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Postby enjinn » Nov 17th, '13, 23:23

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you see enjinn you sense a ghost, get tense and post
i got them ignorant lines im fresh than most
dont test the flow
im on a quest to boast, then watch a movie online
get speed twice a month, hope the dude is on time
the skill is best...illest vet...kill the rest...best flow
still a threat...fill the net...drill the head...neck broke
BEEN merking netcees...started in oh three
you can be the light, im darker you know me
my ish harder the flow heat
battle?
when its over theyll wrap your carcass in old sheets
each one teaches one
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Re: short verse

Postby Just Silver » Nov 17th, '13, 23:49

Some good stuff here unique flow sometimes I felt u should've switched some lyrics

Or meant to say something else like I'm "fresh than most" instead of fresher
The movie online and then buying speed was weird but sorta cool lol

Keep writing guy switch up flows
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Re: short verse

Postby enjinn » Nov 18th, '13, 01:20

thanks family!...i did the fresh than most on purpose to sound ignorant...you feel me fam?...the movie and speed lines was just something i wanted to add from my real life
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